"The Twilight Saga : Eclipse" 伦敦 Premiere

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- NeeNee14

As I walked down the hallway I heard my name in everyone,s conversation. I hate being the center of attention just like my mom.
"That's Renesmee Cullen. Do 你 remember Edward Cullen,that's his niece." I heard someone say.
"I know who she is and she is so hot!" I heard some one reply. I rolled my eyes.
I walked into my 11th grade science class and I smiled thinking back to when my parents told me about the first time they saw each other.I sat down in the middle row waiting for this stupid school to start. I didn't...

???: _____________ we are here. It is time to wake up.
You: Huh? Em I don't want to get up.
Em: 你 have to get off of the plane. We are here.
You got up and hung on to Emmett as if your life depended on it. 你 got your lugguage and got in to a car and 你 guys drove to a 船, 小船 dock then he sped off in a motor boat. Before 你 knew it 你 were at a island. 你 were about to get up when 你 got really lightheaded and blacked out.
Emmett POV:
We got to the island and I turned to put the luggage on land and when I turned back around __________ was on the ground. I don't know what happened but, I am...