Ok so I'm not too good at reviews but lets see what I got.
Twlight:
The start of Twilight is the Cullens hunting I think that is a gret start but what could have been another great one? Maybe one of Alices visions 或者 Bellas nightmare? Then Bella digging a cactus I 爱情 it! I think it is something 你 woud do to have a little bit of 首页 with 你 and phil calling I 爱情 你 both but we have a plane to catch sutch a typicall guy! Thenn when Bella was with charlie and they were talking about her hair growing so funny! Then when Bella hit Jake with the truck and didn't give a damn that was also funny. At school Jessica was so jaulous<- soz bout spelling. When she seen Edward in Biology 你 could feel the tension from then on. The baseball scene 下一个 then..... With Rose and Emm so funny and cute but when the three others come up well 你 cant help but scream. Then the ballet scene soooo scary but I was so realived when Edward turned up and felt so sorry for him when he had to drink Bellas blood. The hospital was such a sweet scene. And finally PROM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 The best scene ever it was soo sweet!!
Twlight:
The start of Twilight is the Cullens hunting I think that is a gret start but what could have been another great one? Maybe one of Alices visions 或者 Bellas nightmare? Then Bella digging a cactus I 爱情 it! I think it is something 你 woud do to have a little bit of 首页 with 你 and phil calling I 爱情 你 both but we have a plane to catch sutch a typicall guy! Thenn when Bella was with charlie and they were talking about her hair growing so funny! Then when Bella hit Jake with the truck and didn't give a damn that was also funny. At school Jessica was so jaulous<- soz bout spelling. When she seen Edward in Biology 你 could feel the tension from then on. The baseball scene 下一个 then..... With Rose and Emm so funny and cute but when the three others come up well 你 cant help but scream. Then the ballet scene soooo scary but I was so realived when Edward turned up and felt so sorry for him when he had to drink Bellas blood. The hospital was such a sweet scene. And finally PROM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 The best scene ever it was soo sweet!!
Jane's POV
Me and the others quickly approched Forks hospital, I looked around. Then i spun around a nodded. The others took off going around back. I walked to the front, I held a single gun. But i knew I didnt need it! *giggle*
Renesme lay in pain on the rock hard hospital. She moaned in pain. "It's ok" Jacob 说 softly. *Screaming in distince* "What...was that?" Bella inqiured.Edward shook his head. For he didnt know. *gunshots* Bella and Edward stood up, frightened. "Edward go check whats happining,I'll call Alice and the others ok?" Edward agreed and ran out the room. Bella quickly dialed her other family member's. On the other line, Alice and the whole family listened. "Well be there in 5 miniutes!" Shouted Alice into the phone. 5 分钟 later, the rest of the cullens arrived, rushing to a certain room, with a certain girl crying out in pain.
Me and the others quickly approched Forks hospital, I looked around. Then i spun around a nodded. The others took off going around back. I walked to the front, I held a single gun. But i knew I didnt need it! *giggle*
Renesme lay in pain on the rock hard hospital. She moaned in pain. "It's ok" Jacob 说 softly. *Screaming in distince* "What...was that?" Bella inqiured.Edward shook his head. For he didnt know. *gunshots* Bella and Edward stood up, frightened. "Edward go check whats happining,I'll call Alice and the others ok?" Edward agreed and ran out the room. Bella quickly dialed her other family member's. On the other line, Alice and the whole family listened. "Well be there in 5 miniutes!" Shouted Alice into the phone. 5 分钟 later, the rest of the cullens arrived, rushing to a certain room, with a certain girl crying out in pain.
I am sorry that i hvae not been on in almost a 年 i discovered FanFiction.net and fell in 爱情 with it.
I'm also sorry to say that i may not finish this story. I will either change to where it is Bella and either Jasper, Sam 或者 Paul. I am leaning 更多 to Jasper. The reason for this is because I have fallen in 爱情 with Jasper, Sam and Paul being with Bella. Along with a little bit Jared.
或者 I will allow someone to take over this story. I already have someone in mind to cintinue it if that person still wants to write it.
I have yet to decided which one it will take me a while to choose which one with school softball and explorers.
Please commett cause I will look at those and they will also help me decide which one
I'm also sorry to say that i may not finish this story. I will either change to where it is Bella and either Jasper, Sam 或者 Paul. I am leaning 更多 to Jasper. The reason for this is because I have fallen in 爱情 with Jasper, Sam and Paul being with Bella. Along with a little bit Jared.
或者 I will allow someone to take over this story. I already have someone in mind to cintinue it if that person still wants to write it.
I have yet to decided which one it will take me a while to choose which one with school softball and explorers.
Please commett cause I will look at those and they will also help me decide which one
“Everybody likes to make fun of “Twilight” – adults, children, house pets – but the producers of the films threw a monkey wrench in the gears of the irony machine 由 stuffing the soundtrack to their latest effort full of awesome songs from ultra-cool indie bands. “Eclipse” is a who’s who of moody indie rock, featuring a lineup that would make Pitchfork’s brains explode: Beck, Bat For Lashes, Metric, Vampire Weekend, Muse, the Black Keys…the 列表 goes on and on. Perhaps this all shouldn’t be surprising 给 that 音乐 supervisor Alexandra Patsavas made a name for herself turning television’s “The O.C.” into an avenue for indie rock exposure, but it’s still a very pleasant surprise to see the 音乐 from a “Twilight” film become the “Singles” soundtrack of the aughts.”