This is my own story which was inspired 由 the twilight series and I had an idea to write my own story about 吸血鬼 but I only managed to write the preface only so I would appreciate some 评论 on it and perhaps some ideas to make my story interesting but to any future writer please do not copy this as this is my idea and i hope to get it published if I do finish this story. Thanks everyone!
Preface
I found myself standing in the very woods that i'd promised to stay away from but I had my reasons for being here. it was getting darker and colder so I wrapped my 夹克 around me tighter. The woods was filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and he appeared from the treetops of a nearby 树 and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers to my spine before slowly approaching me and my 心 was pounding inside my chest. I was vunerable as ther wasn't anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to diehere, alone.Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing as the cold and 苦 November wind blew and I found myself shivering because of the coldnss and fear that I felt.
These 问题 filled my head and I knew that he ws still watching me as my breathing became heavier. I never expected this dat to come so soon but ever since Luke and his family's arrival, I should have seen this coming soon and this was one of the risk that I took for being with Luke but I would gladly pay the price. As I looked directly into his eye, I saw hatred and anger and it had consumed the slayer's mind.
I knew that this was the end of me now.
That's all for now...Sorry if it is a little long... I will continue soon whenever I am online again... Keep the 评论 coming in.Thanks for your comments..
Preface
I found myself standing in the very woods that i'd promised to stay away from but I had my reasons for being here. it was getting darker and colder so I wrapped my 夹克 around me tighter. The woods was filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and he appeared from the treetops of a nearby 树 and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers to my spine before slowly approaching me and my 心 was pounding inside my chest. I was vunerable as ther wasn't anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to diehere, alone.Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing as the cold and 苦 November wind blew and I found myself shivering because of the coldnss and fear that I felt.
These 问题 filled my head and I knew that he ws still watching me as my breathing became heavier. I never expected this dat to come so soon but ever since Luke and his family's arrival, I should have seen this coming soon and this was one of the risk that I took for being with Luke but I would gladly pay the price. As I looked directly into his eye, I saw hatred and anger and it had consumed the slayer's mind.
I knew that this was the end of me now.
That's all for now...Sorry if it is a little long... I will continue soon whenever I am online again... Keep the 评论 coming in.Thanks for your comments..
one eager look from 你 and 由 心 starts to soar.
i dont know how it could be. that i would 爱情 你 more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side 由 side.i want all of 你 forever.no less time will ever do
你 say how can 你 ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long 以前 when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of 你 and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me 由 the hand and lead me anywhere.with 你 my time is yours to share. i 爱情 you
bella
i dont know how it could be. that i would 爱情 你 more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side 由 side.i want all of 你 forever.no less time will ever do
你 say how can 你 ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long 以前 when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of 你 and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me 由 the hand and lead me anywhere.with 你 my time is yours to share. i 爱情 you
bella
Okay beacause I am a huge Twilight 粉丝 I have joined this club. I fell in 爱情 after the first 3 chapters of Tiwilight and I am still in the process of 阅读 the books. If 你 could please at least say in the beginning of your 文章 that it is concerning X books. That would help me out soooo much because I only have a limited amount of time I can read because of school and homework. The mentioning of things that I have not read yet is making me want to read the 图书 so much 更多 and it has caused me to get in trouble at school for 阅读 when I shouldn't be. Thank 你 so VERY much.
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were 金牌 and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend 或者 girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in 爱情 and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would 爱情 edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the 图书 yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank 你 for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please 评论 of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in 爱情 and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would 爱情 edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the 图书 yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank 你 for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please 评论 of wat u think of my article...=þ
thanks for 阅读 im really new at this as some of guys can tell