嘿 guys i come up with this poem its just a 随意 thing 最佳, 返回页首 of my head and i was wonderin if it was good?

ok ur probably gettin sick me askin over nd over but i was thinkin of puttin my new poems into an articale and wondering if my poems are good enough and if its a good idea....and if this is good enough poem to be in an article??


i close my eyes and all i see is your beautiful smile
ill fall asleep and dream about 你 all night long
your my faviroute song
and ill always 爱情 you
even when your old and everyone else is sick of you
ill always pick you
no matter what people say ull always be my perfect song