Just a sample of a fanfic ive considered writing. Tell me what 你 think.
All SOA characters belong to Kurt Sutter aside from my OC
He was back in his own country, it had been so long but he was finally back.
No that wasn't right, he wasn't in his own country, he hadn't been there in 18 years. No he wasn't there, but he was home, it had been ten years since he was last here. Ten years.....
He stepped out of the SUV, the cold air hitting him in the face like a ton of bricks. This was California it shouldn't be this cold. He nodded to the driver, letting him known it was okay to leave. But the black behemoth didn't pull out of the parking lot it just sat there. The driver looking at him curiously, probably wondering why he didn't want to clean himself up before he got home. But instead he nodded, shifted the gears and drove into the night. Husky stood there outside the clubhouse, his feet just froze there, a great part of him just wanted to take off and leave, to run, hell his entire being wanted to. But he couldn't, no this was his home, his family, all of it was his, he couldn't run away.....not anymore.
He took a deep breath, trying to calm his shaky hands, he reached for the doorknob, only then did he realize how dirty they were, covered in foreign filth. Maybe he should have taken a shower, at first it had never crossed his mind. Once he boarded that plane back to the US, the only thing he could focus on was getting home, facing whatever lay in wait for him. He road the plane still marked from the war, still wearing the same sweat-soaked uniform, the dried blood still on his face. And he allowed himself to be driven 首页 without bothering to cleanup. He wondered if they would even recognize him, 或者 had the war aged him beyond recognition? 或者 would he terrify them, looking so battle worn.
It didn't matter though, he was here now, they were his family, they'd take him back, at least he hoped so.
He stepped through the doorway, taking just enough steps to put himself right in the middle. Just enough so everyone in the room could seem, no matter who they were 'servicing' at the moment. As soon as he had opened the door though all eyes were on him. And it was like 50 pound weight had just landed on him for every pair of eyes. His backpack suddenly felt like a damn anvil. The surprise on his brothers faces hit him like knives, each one twisting in his gut. He couldn't tell if they were happy 或者 mad just surprised their mouths hanging open. The whores and croweaters were shooed away, they exited through he door behind him all glaring at him as they passed for ruining their fun.
He could see Bobby standing to his left a cuestick in one hand, and a 啤酒 hanging loosely from the other. Chibs, the Scotsman, stood near the bar leaning on it, he had already dropped his whiskey, it laid on the floor beneath him, the brown liquid oozing out the bottle. His other brothers were there too. Jax, Tig, Clay, Piney, and Opie all standing some distance away, all not sure what to do but Clay, he glared his blue eyes grey burning holes in him. And Husky knew damn well why. The silence was momentarily broken though as she entered the room, a tray full of coffee cups, plates, and various alcohol. All clattering to the floor with a loud shattering noise as pieces of glass flew in all directions. Her whole body shook and tears were hanging in her eyes, but there was also anger a deep-seated anger that had been boiling inside her and was now bubbling over.
Husky looked at Gemma, she was as beautiful and strong as ever, the years had been kind to her. But he couldn't look her in the eyes not after what he had done to her the pain he caused her.
She strutted 前锋, 期待 to him, quickly, every step fum of purpose. She stopped in front of him her hands caressing his face, she traced the scar on the side of his face so gently, but it sent sparks across his skin. Her fingers then moved to the the wound above his eye close to the hairline, the fresh wound that was still open and crusted with dried blood.Her mouth was open a bit like she still couldn't believe he was there, even though she could touch him and feel the warmth if his skin. He knew he had to say something, he had hundreds of things to say all running through his head, crashing into eachother he couldn't form words. He did have one word though.
"Mom." No sooner had it left his mouth, did his head jerk to the side with a 拍击, smack, 味道 of skin on skin, and he could already feel the vibrant red handprint on his face. He turned back to her, his eyes cold but not because of her 或者 even the stinging slap she just gave him. His eyes had just been dead for a long time.
Gemma looked about ready to cry, but she wouldn't not here in front of the rest of the club. She dragged him into an embrace making his back pack slip of his shoulders before squeezing him so tight he could barely breathe. Husky felt pain shooting up his spine, and across his chest for he was still sore from his injuries. But there was no way he was going to push her away, she needed this.
And that she did, Gemma hugged her son tightly, holding him close, believing that if she held on long enough it would sink in that he was really here and he would never leave her again. "My boy." She muttered into his chest as they stood embracing eachother, her head laying against his chest and his tilted on her shoulder.
It was like those two words were a cue to the rest of the group 或者 something, for in 分钟 they were all swarming around him, hugging him and patting him on the back. All muttering things along the lines of "I'm so glad you're back!" and "We all missed 你 brother" words of endearment coming from everyone's mouth. Even Clay who had glared at him so violently earlier, now only had eyes full of 爱情 for his son. He was still mad and he would be for awhile, but Husky didn't blame him. The way he had left, had upset Gemma beyond all belief, seeing his 爱情 hurt like so probably killed Clay.
Eventually the greetings died away, and everyone stood around tears glistening their eyes but not falling down their face. Ha, big bad bikers brought to tears over a brother coming home.
"Come on, lets get 你 cleaned up." Gemma whispered as she took her sons hand and led him to one of the dorm rooms with a 淋浴 at the back of the clubhouse. Walking down the hall, Husky could here shouts of joy behind him, and his brothers yelling in 欢乐合唱团 as they prepared for a long night of whores, drinks, and partying. All in celebration of Husky coming home.
All SOA characters belong to Kurt Sutter aside from my OC
He was back in his own country, it had been so long but he was finally back.
No that wasn't right, he wasn't in his own country, he hadn't been there in 18 years. No he wasn't there, but he was home, it had been ten years since he was last here. Ten years.....
He stepped out of the SUV, the cold air hitting him in the face like a ton of bricks. This was California it shouldn't be this cold. He nodded to the driver, letting him known it was okay to leave. But the black behemoth didn't pull out of the parking lot it just sat there. The driver looking at him curiously, probably wondering why he didn't want to clean himself up before he got home. But instead he nodded, shifted the gears and drove into the night. Husky stood there outside the clubhouse, his feet just froze there, a great part of him just wanted to take off and leave, to run, hell his entire being wanted to. But he couldn't, no this was his home, his family, all of it was his, he couldn't run away.....not anymore.
He took a deep breath, trying to calm his shaky hands, he reached for the doorknob, only then did he realize how dirty they were, covered in foreign filth. Maybe he should have taken a shower, at first it had never crossed his mind. Once he boarded that plane back to the US, the only thing he could focus on was getting home, facing whatever lay in wait for him. He road the plane still marked from the war, still wearing the same sweat-soaked uniform, the dried blood still on his face. And he allowed himself to be driven 首页 without bothering to cleanup. He wondered if they would even recognize him, 或者 had the war aged him beyond recognition? 或者 would he terrify them, looking so battle worn.
It didn't matter though, he was here now, they were his family, they'd take him back, at least he hoped so.
He stepped through the doorway, taking just enough steps to put himself right in the middle. Just enough so everyone in the room could seem, no matter who they were 'servicing' at the moment. As soon as he had opened the door though all eyes were on him. And it was like 50 pound weight had just landed on him for every pair of eyes. His backpack suddenly felt like a damn anvil. The surprise on his brothers faces hit him like knives, each one twisting in his gut. He couldn't tell if they were happy 或者 mad just surprised their mouths hanging open. The whores and croweaters were shooed away, they exited through he door behind him all glaring at him as they passed for ruining their fun.
He could see Bobby standing to his left a cuestick in one hand, and a 啤酒 hanging loosely from the other. Chibs, the Scotsman, stood near the bar leaning on it, he had already dropped his whiskey, it laid on the floor beneath him, the brown liquid oozing out the bottle. His other brothers were there too. Jax, Tig, Clay, Piney, and Opie all standing some distance away, all not sure what to do but Clay, he glared his blue eyes grey burning holes in him. And Husky knew damn well why. The silence was momentarily broken though as she entered the room, a tray full of coffee cups, plates, and various alcohol. All clattering to the floor with a loud shattering noise as pieces of glass flew in all directions. Her whole body shook and tears were hanging in her eyes, but there was also anger a deep-seated anger that had been boiling inside her and was now bubbling over.
Husky looked at Gemma, she was as beautiful and strong as ever, the years had been kind to her. But he couldn't look her in the eyes not after what he had done to her the pain he caused her.
She strutted 前锋, 期待 to him, quickly, every step fum of purpose. She stopped in front of him her hands caressing his face, she traced the scar on the side of his face so gently, but it sent sparks across his skin. Her fingers then moved to the the wound above his eye close to the hairline, the fresh wound that was still open and crusted with dried blood.Her mouth was open a bit like she still couldn't believe he was there, even though she could touch him and feel the warmth if his skin. He knew he had to say something, he had hundreds of things to say all running through his head, crashing into eachother he couldn't form words. He did have one word though.
"Mom." No sooner had it left his mouth, did his head jerk to the side with a 拍击, smack, 味道 of skin on skin, and he could already feel the vibrant red handprint on his face. He turned back to her, his eyes cold but not because of her 或者 even the stinging slap she just gave him. His eyes had just been dead for a long time.
Gemma looked about ready to cry, but she wouldn't not here in front of the rest of the club. She dragged him into an embrace making his back pack slip of his shoulders before squeezing him so tight he could barely breathe. Husky felt pain shooting up his spine, and across his chest for he was still sore from his injuries. But there was no way he was going to push her away, she needed this.
And that she did, Gemma hugged her son tightly, holding him close, believing that if she held on long enough it would sink in that he was really here and he would never leave her again. "My boy." She muttered into his chest as they stood embracing eachother, her head laying against his chest and his tilted on her shoulder.
It was like those two words were a cue to the rest of the group 或者 something, for in 分钟 they were all swarming around him, hugging him and patting him on the back. All muttering things along the lines of "I'm so glad you're back!" and "We all missed 你 brother" words of endearment coming from everyone's mouth. Even Clay who had glared at him so violently earlier, now only had eyes full of 爱情 for his son. He was still mad and he would be for awhile, but Husky didn't blame him. The way he had left, had upset Gemma beyond all belief, seeing his 爱情 hurt like so probably killed Clay.
Eventually the greetings died away, and everyone stood around tears glistening their eyes but not falling down their face. Ha, big bad bikers brought to tears over a brother coming home.
"Come on, lets get 你 cleaned up." Gemma whispered as she took her sons hand and led him to one of the dorm rooms with a 淋浴 at the back of the clubhouse. Walking down the hall, Husky could here shouts of joy behind him, and his brothers yelling in 欢乐合唱团 as they prepared for a long night of whores, drinks, and partying. All in celebration of Husky coming home.
........ Kairtlyn sighed. Normally she would get eighteen coins this 日 from selling flowers, but she got two today. She picked her 花 basket. Nobody in Sderina would want 花 now. They are celebrating the Dutchess Maira's birthday. As she walked, two guards pointed a her.
"She's the Duke's daughter!" one of them shouted. The guards began to chase her. She ran away, and slipped....
(literally 80 分钟 later...)
"There she was!" one of the guards said. She had fainted, and she was opening her eyes....
"What are 你 doing with me?!" she shouted.
"We want 你 to live at the Duke's castle......"
(To Be Continued.)
"She's the Duke's daughter!" one of them shouted. The guards began to chase her. She ran away, and slipped....
(literally 80 分钟 later...)
"There she was!" one of the guards said. She had fainted, and she was opening her eyes....
"What are 你 doing with me?!" she shouted.
"We want 你 to live at the Duke's castle......"
(To Be Continued.)
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This is my first full-length story that I've made.
你 know, I would post it here chapter 由 chapter, but there's 23. And that would entirely cover up 'The Deadly Truth' (I know that should probably be underlined but my computer sucks and that isn't an option on here) chapters that are up thus far so I'm not doing that xD
Based off of the Percy Jackson series.
Note: This story kind of stinks, especially the first five chapters. Eve is a major Mary-Sue at the beginning, I think, but fanfiction.net won't let me change it so I can't really do much about it (plus I'm a sentimental weirdo who doesn't like to change things-- really gotta get over that). The 秒 story, which I'll post after I get feedback on this, is WAY better. I'm on chapter 14 of that and it's already longer than the first and 由 FAR 更多 descriptive and all. I blame myself for being younger when I started the first one :P
This is my first full-length story that I've made.
你 know, I would post it here chapter 由 chapter, but there's 23. And that would entirely cover up 'The Deadly Truth' (I know that should probably be underlined but my computer sucks and that isn't an option on here) chapters that are up thus far so I'm not doing that xD
Based off of the Percy Jackson series.
Note: This story kind of stinks, especially the first five chapters. Eve is a major Mary-Sue at the beginning, I think, but fanfiction.net won't let me change it so I can't really do much about it (plus I'm a sentimental weirdo who doesn't like to change things-- really gotta get over that). The 秒 story, which I'll post after I get feedback on this, is WAY better. I'm on chapter 14 of that and it's already longer than the first and 由 FAR 更多 descriptive and all. I blame myself for being younger when I started the first one :P
This song is about braking up with someone. Please 加入 my club E-Scope90 if 你 like it. I'll post some 更多 if I get enough views.
Caysee
Oh Caysee
Casee, Caysee,
Can't 你 see
Your 爱情 isn't fit
For 你 and me
Caysee, why won't 你 understand
I don't want to take your hand
Oh
Caysee
Why can't 你 find someone else,
Oh Caysee?
Caysee, don't feel so blue
你 can find a boy for you.
(repeat 2x)
Caysee, why cant 你 see
You're just not the one for me.
Just please understand
Our 爱情 isn't grand.
I don't wanna make a fit in front of the 音乐 stand
Caysee
Can't 你 see
You're not the one for me
Caysee, oh Caysee
Oh, can't 你 see???!!!
你 can never be...
the one....
for me...
Caysee
Oh Caysee
Casee, Caysee,
Can't 你 see
Your 爱情 isn't fit
For 你 and me
Caysee, why won't 你 understand
I don't want to take your hand
Oh
Caysee
Why can't 你 find someone else,
Oh Caysee?
Caysee, don't feel so blue
你 can find a boy for you.
(repeat 2x)
Caysee, why cant 你 see
You're just not the one for me.
Just please understand
Our 爱情 isn't grand.
I don't wanna make a fit in front of the 音乐 stand
Caysee
Can't 你 see
You're not the one for me
Caysee, oh Caysee
Oh, can't 你 see???!!!
你 can never be...
the one....
for me...
Chapter 8: to the Future
The 年 3020, Kitsunes and Humans live in peace, because of Amber and Jay's triumph over tyranny...
"Amber, do 你 think about having children?" 松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · asked Amber.
"I do, sometimes" Amber responded, as the doorbell rung. Amber went to see who was there, but all she saw was a pair of baby Kitsunes in a basket.
松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · walked down the stairs to be with her, and saw them. "Who abandoned a pair of baby Kitsunes?" 松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · thought to himself, as Amber picked them both up.
"Jay, can we adopt them?" Amber asked him.
"Of course, they are our children" 松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · replied.
The 年 3020, Kitsunes and Humans live in peace, because of Amber and Jay's triumph over tyranny...
"Amber, do 你 think about having children?" 松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · asked Amber.
"I do, sometimes" Amber responded, as the doorbell rung. Amber went to see who was there, but all she saw was a pair of baby Kitsunes in a basket.
松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · walked down the stairs to be with her, and saw them. "Who abandoned a pair of baby Kitsunes?" 松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · thought to himself, as Amber picked them both up.
"Jay, can we adopt them?" Amber asked him.
"Of course, they are our children" 松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · replied.
I wrote this it's kinda 随意 not about 爱情 this time. That's rare.
Yeeeeeaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
Ooh
I'm going free style all over
Enjoy the supernova
This is special
really special
I'm so free of styles I'm full
Hey
Anything can do yeah
Anything can do
Because I'm going
free
style
Won't come with me for a while
Because I'm going
free
style
I'm going, I'm doing, I know
I'm going
free
style
Come on with me for a smile
Because I'm going
free
style
We can do it with our style
Come on
To see
The newest
Free
style
Yeeeeeaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
Ooh
I'm going free style all over
Enjoy the supernova
This is special
really special
I'm so free of styles I'm full
Hey
Anything can do yeah
Anything can do
Because I'm going
free
style
Won't come with me for a while
Because I'm going
free
style
I'm going, I'm doing, I know
I'm going
free
style
Come on with me for a smile
Because I'm going
free
style
We can do it with our style
Come on
To see
The newest
Free
style
This is a song I wrote when I was 6 或者 7 I improved it a little I didn't add to it though.
United 8 Planets
United 8 Planets
United 8 Planets are in the sky
United 8 Planets 1 2 3 to try
I 爱情 你 更多 than united 8 planets
Kissin' the sky girl
But our 爱情 is stronger than the bond
of united 8 planets
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaahhh
Fun
Any 日 你 wanna hang out
But I doubt
Our 爱情 is stronger
than united 8 planets
yeah yeah yeah
woooooooooooooo
yeah yeah yeah
woooooooooooooo
yeah yeah yeah
woooooooooooooo
yeah yeah yeah
United 8 Planets
United 8 Planets
United 8 Planets are in the sky
United 8 Planets 1 2 3 to try
I 爱情 你 更多 than united 8 planets
Kissin' the sky girl
But our 爱情 is stronger than the bond
of united 8 planets
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaahhh
Fun
Any 日 你 wanna hang out
But I doubt
Our 爱情 is stronger
than united 8 planets
yeah yeah yeah
woooooooooooooo
yeah yeah yeah
woooooooooooooo
yeah yeah yeah
woooooooooooooo
yeah yeah yeah
A song 由 me it's short because it has a 30 秒 intro and also the song is pretty slow.
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I know I feel down. But don't try to make me happy.
Not this 或者 that, can help. Not that either. But only one thing. But now,
I feel so lonely. Deep down, depressed
If 你 were here, I'd feel happy
Now I feel so sappy
你 were the one that make me happy, but your'e not here girl
I know 你 are gone, and I feel lonely without you
你 were my mate no need for the other girls to debate
I feel lonelier than a log a log in a big thick fog
I feel so lonely
If only 你 were here
(repeat)
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I know I feel down. But don't try to make me happy.
Not this 或者 that, can help. Not that either. But only one thing. But now,
I feel so lonely. Deep down, depressed
If 你 were here, I'd feel happy
Now I feel so sappy
你 were the one that make me happy, but your'e not here girl
I know 你 are gone, and I feel lonely without you
你 were my mate no need for the other girls to debate
I feel lonelier than a log a log in a big thick fog
I feel so lonely
If only 你 were here
(repeat)
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Kairtlyn did not believe the guards' words. " How could it be?" she asked."My mother's a normal citizen."
"Of course it could be. I will tell 你 the story." one of the guards promised.But Kairtlyn did not believe that easily. She punched the guard straight on his face.
"Ow!" the guard shouted. But the other guard was strong and muscular and in an instant he had grabbed her.
"Let me go!" she said."I'm not the Duke's daughter! It's utter nonsense!"
Unfortunately, it was true. Kairtlyn didn't realize it.....
"Of course it could be. I will tell 你 the story." one of the guards promised.But Kairtlyn did not believe that easily. She punched the guard straight on his face.
"Ow!" the guard shouted. But the other guard was strong and muscular and in an instant he had grabbed her.
"Let me go!" she said."I'm not the Duke's daughter! It's utter nonsense!"
Unfortunately, it was true. Kairtlyn didn't realize it.....
There was once a woman who ran in the woods. She had brown hair that trailed behind her like a tail. She was running away from the guards of the mansion near the woods.
"Stop!" the guard ordered.
"I won't stop keeping the secret except Reginald would let 你 stop chasing me!" the woman replied with a voice that signifies that she was tired.
" Are 你 running only for a lowly creature?" the guard 说 with a strong voice.
" I am not afraid. Kill me." the woman said, "but leave the baby safe."
"But why?! It's a baby girl, and 你 know girls and woman are worthless except for the maids and the members of the Rosrien. You, the honorable Lady Freryn, why are 你 running for that silly little girl that is not from the House Of Rosrien?"
" Stop all the talk. This is my order. kill me, and let the baby safe." Lady Freryn ordered.
" Alright."the guards said.....
-To Be Continued.
"Stop!" the guard ordered.
"I won't stop keeping the secret except Reginald would let 你 stop chasing me!" the woman replied with a voice that signifies that she was tired.
" Are 你 running only for a lowly creature?" the guard 说 with a strong voice.
" I am not afraid. Kill me." the woman said, "but leave the baby safe."
"But why?! It's a baby girl, and 你 know girls and woman are worthless except for the maids and the members of the Rosrien. You, the honorable Lady Freryn, why are 你 running for that silly little girl that is not from the House Of Rosrien?"
" Stop all the talk. This is my order. kill me, and let the baby safe." Lady Freryn ordered.
" Alright."the guards said.....
-To Be Continued.