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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 5
        Daredevil’s plus mall equals disaster
    The end of the 日 was finally over, and I was shaking with enthusiasm. At first we were going to Lara’s house, but then we decided to go a mall (that I didn’t know existed until now) that was close to my house.
    “First things first, were going to the arcade.”
    “Arcade? 你 guys always hog the games.” Corrie complained. “How about we eat first?”
    “FOOD!” Yelled all the boys.
    Lara and America rolled their eyes, while Cali and I grinned. We made our way to the 食物 court, which, as always in every single mall known, was crowded. People were bustling and there wasn’t many seats left…scratch that there was no seats, none that I could see anyways.
    “Where are we going to sit?” Cory asked.
    “Food first, sitting later.” Donnie said, dragging America, our piggybank to the 食物 areas, with the rest of us in tow.
    “So what do 你 guy’s want?” America asked, unfolding her money.
    “Doesn’t matter, your paying.” Xavier said.
    “How about pizza? 或者 we can have a nice juicy burger with fries?”
    “How about popcorn, 玉米片, 墨西哥玉米片 with the cheesy stuff, candy, pizza, and drinks?” Cali asked, we all looked at her. “What!?”
    “That…is…brilliant!” Gregori said, “who’s with her say here!”
    “Here!” We all shouted.
    “Okay, I’ll get the stuff,” America said. “You guys find a place, oh and I’ll need help, Lara?”
    “Sure!” Lara said, bouncing happily away with America to the movie theater for most of the food, while Donnie helped out and went to the 比萨, 比萨饼 parlor for our pizza.
    “Now back to my original question, where are we going to sit?” Cory asked, again.
    “We can sit, no, not there. Oh, how about- no not their either…” Gregori trailed off, his brow scrunching.
    “How about we sit on the floor, up against that wall?” I suggested, pointing to the 墙 closets to the garbage and restroom, it was also the side of a store, but it wasn’t a window wall.
    I felt my 心 beat as silence followed, but I let out a breath of relief when Corrie said. “Not bad, let’s go!”
    At those words, we all raced to the wall, I bet we looked crazy but it was so fun and exhilarating, that I didn’t care. We all laughed and ignored the strange and amused looks people gave us, we were just having fun. We don’t need a bunch of people ruining that. We all cheered as America, Lara, and Donnie came back with the food.
    Lara laughed. “Looks like were at the fun …area.”
    “Yeah,” America said, grinning while looking at some of the people’s gazes that were drifted to us. “It looks like we are.”
    We all laughed and dug in the food, soon enough we were throwing 爆米花 at each other and reciting some of the lamest pick up lines. People would continue looking at us, some annoyed and other’s wanting to 加入 us.
    By the time we were done, we were full and drained. But of course, that didn’t stop us.
    “Okay, okay, okay.” America sputtered out, shaking with laughter. “Who wants to do something devious.”
    “On a scale of 1 to 10, how devious?” Gregori asked, smirking evilly.
    “10,” America whispered, and the rest of us squealed in agreement.
    “What do 你 have planned?”
    America opened her mouth, but Cali beat her to it.
    “Ooh! I got one!”
    “What?” Cory asked.
    “Okay, so 你 know how the mall has tons of bathrooms?”
    “Yes…”
    “We can mess with some people in there, like I still have that slimey goo 你 made my dog fake sneeze up.”
    “And we put the goo in the toilet for the 下一个 victim!”
    “Or we flush all the toilets for the biggest collision!”
    “But what if we get caught?” I asked.
    “Sweetie, we have never been caught.” Lara explained. “We do this thing every time we come here, there services and security are just not good.”
    “Hey, since your new, 你 get to the pick the prank we’ll do.” Cory offered.
    I nodded, eager to please. I racked my head for suggestions. “How about we go to the movie theater 或者 the bathrooms here and we dump water balloons on people.”
    One Mississippi, two Mississippi, three Mississippi.
    They all exploded in laughter, nodding eagerly and cheering while jumping up and down saying yes.
    “You, my dear, are a genius.” Donnie stated, and I blushed.
    “Let’s do it!”
    In the end we went to a store nearby, and stacked up on water balloons. We 分裂, 拆分 up into groups of four and five, the four were Cory and Corrie, and Xavier and Cali, who went to the restrooms and hid in the stall waiting for the victims.
    The rest of us, Lara, America, Gregori, Donnie, and I, all sneaked into a movie that was already in progress. The security guard was a bit distracted 由 the infestation of remote controlled cars that the people were freaking over.
    We all shook with laughter as we went to the highest and empty seats where we hid, armed with our wet balloons.
    When the movie started the 音乐 got into that scary 音乐 before something happened. It was inching up into that part that would make 你 jump, as the 音乐 went boom!
    Gregori grinned at us as he held a water balloon ready, waiting for the precise moment. After a few seconds, he arched his arm and threw.
    It flew…and flew…and flew…and…
    BOOM!
    The water balloon hit the victim at the precise moment the boom scene happened, and the person screamed freaked out because of what had happened on the screen.
    Gregori turned to us, with a grin he said. “Run.”
Note: this chapter's from Zoe's point of view.
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I turned away from Ryker. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw 讨好, 小鹿 Elliot smiling at him.
    I liked Fawn—at least what I know about her, which isn’t that much. But we did a science project together, so I’ve talked to her.
    She seems nice. Well, she doesn’t talk much, but she has a handful of 老友记 who she wouldn’t dream of leaving. She’s kept some of them since kindergarten.
    I glanced back at...
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Note: This chapters from Quin's point of view. Also, LadyEmzy16 came up with the 标题 Tales of a Group of Outcasts, so she gets full credit for that!

Also, even if 你 don't like it, please 评论 why 你 don't like it so I can make it better.
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I walked into the bathroom and sank to the floor 下一个 to one of the sinks. I stared at the ceiling.
    I was starting to doubt I was ever going to get a boyfriend, 或者 even kiss. I mean, Zoë had her first 吻乐队(Kiss) in fourth grade, and I’m fifteen!
    Of course, that’s Zoë....
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My name is Clarissa. Today, our neighbors suddenly moved out, and warned us of the new neighbors moving in. Something like, "Killer. Devil. Wizard." It sure sounded creepy, and I didn't want to meet my new neighbors, but my parents, being their kind selves, 说 that they had to make a 水果 cake for them.
In the afternoon, when I met the woman, she 说 her name was Jainzsott. She walked a black cat. That woman must be really bad luck, I thought suspiciously. Jainzsott lived on Devil's Lane, 下一个 to my house. She kept her shades drawn, 说 she had two thumbs, and that she could take off...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I stood 《冰雪奇缘》 in the yard for what seemed like eternity, holding that piece of fabric. Could Brett have been taken 由 the wolves? I couldn't shake the image of Brett being dragged away 由 those beasts. I went back in the house and texted his cell. “Hey, u home? Where'd u go this morn?” I closed my phone and placed it on the table. The clock 说 it was only 7:00pm so I made a sandwich, mom had finally gone shopping, and sat in the 厨房 listening to the wind howl. I was enjoying the peace, when my phone rang. I jumped off the chair I was seated on and ran to the living room. I scooped...
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Same guy, different video
video
写作
entertainment
creation
爱情
图书
诗歌
fiction
short story
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He kinda puts it into a whole other perspective.
video
写作
songs
creation
爱情
图书
作者
writer
fiction
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This one is for you!
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写作
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entertainment
creation
爱情
图书
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爱情
凯莉·克莱森
dark side
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posted by MissCarolyn143
Hey Guys!
I'm glad that 你 readers enjoyed the first chapter and/or part now here's the 秒 one!
And again I'm telling 你 this please 评论 if 你 liked it 或者 if
you found something wrong with it cause I really wanna improve my writing!
I also tried to make it longer than the first one which I wrote in while I was in a hurry.
Carolyn

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Part Two:
Autumn stood there in the dark entrance hall,her 心 pounding against her ribcage like a hammer on cloth, "Hello?" she called but there was no response instead the lights...
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I'm a stranger
Just walking on the crossroads,
Waiting for the sun to set,
Hoping the days could go 由 faster

Oh why did 你 ever throw me back?
Cuz now I have to be a stranger
Just sitting on the city benches
There's no place in the world for me

Oh say it's not true,
What 你 told me
I can't live on your garbage everyday
I'm not a stranger in this world

I'm not just a stranger
That no one knows
I don't wanna hide my fear anymore
These city benches are way too dusty

I'm now finding a place for me
You can't keep me inside
Locked up, sewing dresses for you
I'm truly 更多 than 你 may think I am

I'm not a stranger...
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One of my 最喜爱的 songs of all time!!! (I do not own anything)
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写作
songs
entertainment
break