Strider and Esperanza

"Rose before 你 meet spirit,can 你 tell me about yourself?" Rain asked.
"Yes,well first of all i have no herd.And i am single." Rose said. They both laughed.
"And i have been 由 myself for 5 years." She added.
They where on the other side of the 爬坡道, 小山 getting ready. A mountain lion hiding in the bushes,and it was getting ready to pounce.Then it leaped and landed on Rose. She was fighting fiercely. She bucked,kicked,reared,she even did what spirit did, reared and fell on her back.Finally,the mountain lion gave up and ran away. Rose was tired.
"Rose are 你 ok?" Rain asked.
"Yes just tired." Rose answered.
"Are 你 ready to meet the one so special in my life?"
"Yes." She said.
They walked up the 爬坡道, 小山 to meet spirit on the other side.
End of chapter 3.
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Rain was galloping and looking for hours. She ran into many obstacles,like fighting a mountain lion. She had to take a break from looking so she fell asleep. The 下一个 morning. Rain woke up and heard hoof beats. She looked around and sees nothing but she still hears it and it was getting louder. Finally she seen what it was. It was another mare! She was cantering gracefully. She stops in front of Rain. She looked like rain but different. She had Rains 涂层, 外套 but her main and tail was brown. "Is that 你 Rain?" the mare said.
"Rose?" Rain said.
The both neighed happily.
"Can 你 come with me and see someone special in my life?" Rain asked.
"Sure." Rose said. They galloped together all the way home,side 由 side. Finally they got home. "Now Rose i want 你 to get cleaned up for us,ok?"
"You sound just like mom." Rose said.
"And yes i will." rose walks away and gets ready to meet rains boyfriend.
End of chapter 2.
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