What I done//HP Contest//

Her 心 beat fast and her palms were sweaty. She had never wanted to leave Beauxbatons. 冬青, 冬青树 had been forced to transfer to Hogwarts after her father got a transfer at the International Ministry Of Magic Corp. 冬青, 冬青树 was an average height-ed girl at five foot six inches tall with deep shoulder-length red hair and electric blue-green eyes.
As she climbed onto the platform, she saw a huge man with a wild beard calling for the first years. "Alright, I'm not to go there" she thought. She was in her fifth year. Yet another reason to hate this transfer. She stood alone until a boy with a pointed...

The 南瓜 果汁 was spilled all over Severus Snape's face, and some managed to dribble into his jet black hair (which in Lilly's opionion, wasn't greasy but 更多 silky). His clothes were too big, and hung over him, like drapery on a curtain rod. "Sev," Lilly Evans hissed across the table, "there's some 果汁 in your hair." He flushed a shade of scarlet, embarassed at the thought of how rediculous he must look. He grabbed a cloth napkin off the table, and seemingly scrubbed his face, as if rubbing it harder would make James Potter's laughter stop. Lilly caught Severus's hand. "You shouldn't...

Note: I'm not sure I like the way Slughorn came out - 或者 the abrupt ending - so any 评论 on those would be much appreciated :)
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Chapter Two

The walk back to the Slytherin common room was much longer and quieter, giving Severus ample time to think. There wasn't much that needed to be done to sever ties with the “wanna-be-Death-Eaters” – all he had to do was say he apologized to Lily – but he needed to think of a way to stop them from killing him. They wouldn't accept the fact he had...