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Alright im 写作 a song. How does this sound??(:

Im ready Im ready
for the end to happen
Im tired im tired
of everything and every lie
你 made a promise
that 你 were gonna get
better now I understand that 你 just don't want to
Your like wanna of those
stuck up chicks that never wants to quit
the hitting
the names
boy your drivin me insane
i'm tired of this
i've got a black eye the size of your fist
were done
were through
the only problem is I don't know
how to get over you
你 used to bring out the best
but no not now
Your always 表演 like a clown
你 说 你 loved me
boy what happened please tell me
cuz
the hittin
the names
boy your drivin me insane
im tired of this i've got a black eye the size of your fist
were done
were through the only problem is i dont know how to get over you.
你 hurt me because 你 enjoy the pain I scream
and 你 watch me cry
I want out of this
please baby
im tired of this i've got a black eye the size of your fist
im done were through
the only problem i'll ever have is I don't know how to get over you.
 Itsmejordyn411 posted 一年多以前
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peterslover said:
It's a sad song, that's for sure, but well written. What style of 音乐 are 你 gonna go with it? Maybe country/rock?
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that will work!
peterslover posted 一年多以前
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更多 a soulful sound.
Itsmejordyn411 posted 一年多以前
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thanks(:
Itsmejordyn411 posted 一年多以前
pufllys said:
It sounds awesome! :)
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robothor1111 said:
It's a sad song...is it going to be upbeat 或者 slow and mournful? Like some sad songs have a good beat to them, others sound really angsty. What are 你 going for?
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更多 an upbeat like i was thinking from Joss Stone's song Tell Me About it.
Itsmejordyn411 posted 一年多以前
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Oh that's good! Not that I have anything against angsty songs...just saying. :D
robothor1111 posted 一年多以前
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its cool im looking for 更多 an original
Itsmejordyn411 posted 一年多以前
zanhar1 said:
cool
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totaldramarox said:
thats really good, is it your first time 写作 a song? I write some songs but i cant really think of one now. Are 你 in a band?
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Yes I am(: Actually but im the "Music writing" 吉他 player(:
Itsmejordyn411 posted 一年多以前
E-rock said:
Thats good.
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Aha(: Thanks(:
Itsmejordyn411 posted 一年多以前
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