The lighting is terrible, try turning your iso speed up when taking pictures in 灰蒙蒙, 阴云密布 conditions like that.
The composition is good though, all of your lines come together like a visual symphony. The pool almost breaks it, though, 由 being too curved. I would consider either cropping it out, 或者 由 experimenting with different camera heights to exclude it.
This example below isn't one that I did, but it shows something important. 你 need good contrast in a 照片 for it to come together. 你 need to make sure that if 你 put the picture in black and white, 你 can still see in complete clarity what all of the details are. 你 might want to learn something about color value and learn to apply it.
posted 一年多以前
thanks for taking the time to explain,that was helpful
In this 秒 example, I have digitally changed the color value 由 increasing saturation, midtone, and contrast, and it's already a 更多 visually appealing image just 由 the way the 颜色 express themselves. This is work 你 can do easily enough on very simple image manipulation programs, I just use Microsoft office picture viewer, which is as simple as image manipulation gets.
posted 一年多以前
All in all, though, it's at least a solid 7 out of 10 just for composition. I'd like to know what kind of camera 你 used.
There are some programs out there for phones that give 你 更多 control over your camera. I suggest Camera FV-5. Something else 你 can do is if 你 go to the electronics section of walmart, over 由 the 摄影 stuff, 你 should find some clip on lenses that work on just about any phone camera. That way for like $10 你 can do macro, wide angle, and fisheye photography.
Digital post-production, like what I just did, is an important part of digital photography. Some people will tell 你 that it's a copout, but fuck them. There are some things 你 can do on a phone, 你 might look up some image editor apps on your app store. I use one called Image Editor. I hear gimp works well on a computer, but I've never used it.
I think it's very beautiful, I believe the sliver of sun is wonderfully contrasted against the 总体, 整体 cool tones within the picture. also, I enjoy the angle of the chairs, it sort of adds a touch of perspective towards it.And while the 云, 云计算 sort of guides your eyes towards the left of the page at the horizon, the shrub in the distant sort of realigns your eyes back to the right.
你 should totally look into the Golden Ratio while practicing your shots. I think you'd be really good at layering and playing with light. c:
I'm an art major, so if 你 ever wanna hmu and talk about this stuff don't be afraid!
posted 一年多以前
XD I thought 你 说 Golden 小时 which was my original 评论 but nvm
Quite honestly I just set my mug down to refill it when I looked at it and was like "HOLD IT I NEED TO TAKE A 照片 OF THIS. THIS COULD MAKE A GOOD BLACK AND WHITE 照片
