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A Song I Wrote ...Im Sorry If I Misspelled Stuff :( And Please Dont Hate if im terrible :3 I just do this for fun :) Ps. Thanks For Taking Your Time To Read This <3

[Verse 1]
I listen to my heart
And now im here
Trying to get a better life than this shit
Working hard to keep it real
Bi*** all u do is lick a dick
And gettin' ritch
Now u ditching me
Im gettin' a victim
Of my own misery
I see like a fuckin'
Factory of me
Making my pain
Take 更多 weight
So i cant see straight
This shit make me feel
Like i ate
A whole gate
Now cant move
或者 go in a date
With the girl i love....

[Verse 2]
She's above
Anybody i know
She's a rare type of girl
She used to deserve diamonds and pearls'
Cuz she maded my world
Indestructible..
Steel from outside
But warm on inside
The door was open only for her....

[Verse 3]
Thats why she died
She lied
Cought her ridin' in 3 guys di**
At the same time
I just couldnt stand it
Thought i did anything for her
She turned out to be a animal whore....
Thats why i tied em' up
And Shoot em' down
*Click Clak Bang*
They down
They cried
Those tears
Dropped down to the other side
It ain't my fault
They started the fight
I just maded sure to end
It right
And i did
Im not responsible
For them opening the cage
Of the beast i keep inside
Feeding with rage
Which grows bigger and bigger
Everytime i hit the trigger
Im getting vigor
Still not satisfied
Now i cant belive im thinkin
Of Suicide
Cuz im getting terrified
Of the beast in the other side.....


Well thats all i got till now :3 Sorry For the use of words like (di**,Who** and other words u may find offesive .... Its all for rhyme purposes )
 AceGaming posted 一年多以前
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dqwert said:
It is awesome can u make a video and put it on youtobe and send the link to me I wanna hear the tune
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posted 一年多以前 
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Thunks :3
AceGaming posted 一年多以前
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And if i do make it a video ill give ya link ull be the first one to get it :)
AceGaming posted 一年多以前
KohakuJSMA said:
It's very, very good. (Though I find the massive cussing disturbing...) is it rap? When I started reading, I imagined rock/metal, etc.
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posted 一年多以前 
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Hmm Thank :) And Yeah Its Rap :3 Maybe u can call it a diss :3 :3
AceGaming posted 一年多以前
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'kay. my 最喜爱的 音乐 is rap. :>
KohakuJSMA posted 一年多以前
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KohakuJSMA posted 一年多以前
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