I need help with my english. Anyone?

你 have to manny commas. Try this :Tennis ranks as one of the most 流行的 spectator and participation sports in the world. Its popularity spans to 更多 then 100 countries. Millions of people, though mostly ametuers, play the game worldwide. It can be played either as recreation 或者 in ametuer tournaments.

Im not the best at english lol, but i hope what i 说 helped.

- David

Ok... so I'm portuguese, so maybe 你 shouldn't really trust me... But I think that's correct:)

I'm sorry if I couldn't be of much help:(
Lots of love
Ashes:)

Okay, it's pretty good :)
In the first line, "participation" should be changed to "participator" (in order to correspond with "spectator").
And no offense, but the last sentence is a mess. Change it to "Millions of people, most of whom are amateurs, play the game worldwide, either as a form of recreation 或者 a form of competition." (it's too repetitive to say "amateur tournaments")
Oh, and not really important, but it's frowned upon in the English community to write "100." 你 might want to change it to "one hundred." It's not really a big deal, but I know some teachers are sticklers when it comes to details.

Im English and yes, all the wording is correct, Maybe lay off the commas a bit. ( =

Hm maybe lay off the commas a bit lol. But it sounds alright. maybe a bit 更多 sophisticated language cause teachers 爱情 it if 你 do that. so maybe something like
网球 is a very 流行的 sport with thousands of 粉丝 and particapating athletes in today's society..... and 你 can continue on. I dunno try and make it sound a little bit smoother.