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Heyy tell me what 你 think of this poem i wrote. I wrote this poem cause i was recently backstabed 由 someone i called my bestfriend. (Btw let me know if i need to change anything to make it better 或者 any suggestions please & thank you)

Bestfriends are suppose to help 你 up when you're down, Not help 你 make your way down. Bestfriend should care & 爱情 你 for who 你 are, Not what 你 look 或者 act like. Bestfriends should know the real you, not the fake you, Bestfriends should never make 你 change, They should like 你 for being yourself. What's the true meaning of a bestfriend?
 Isabella_17 posted 一年多以前
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afsha1997 said:
oh good but it's not rhyme sorry. 你 should write like these
best 老友记 supposed to help 你 when 你 are sad
when everything wrong everything is bad
my best friend leave me alone when i need her
now there's nothing just dark blue colour
why did 你 betrayed me i'm feeling all alone
feels like my 心 falls to pieces now i'm gone.
i knw my also weird :P
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posted 一年多以前 
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That good:] bettr than mine
Isabella_17 posted 一年多以前
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