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What do 你 think of my poem?

Standing in self-hatred,
drowning in my tears,
looking back on my life,
what I've been through the past 18 years.
Living in my sister's shadow,
everything I do and say,
wishing somehow things would change,
prayong for a way out.
Same old shit just another day,
living this evil life that was created just for me.
Starving for love, affection, and attention,
I know none of this os how it's really supposed to be.
I try to be strong,
even though I feel so weak,
feel like just giving up,
but I can't accept defeat.
Pretending like I'm always happy,
although I'm never really okay.
Waiting for the end,
the pain I feel everyday.
It's hard to say what's wrong,
when nothing goes right.
Hard to keep myself going,
when I've been blinded 由 darkness.
This pain is never ending,
it just goes on and on and on.
It's all so unbelivably real,
I just wish it all was gone.
Trying to pick myself up,
when I've fallen so far and hard.
But I don't know where I'm going,
it's all so very dark.
My 心 is weak, my emotions sore,
I do my best to never let it show.
But deep down inside I feel like I'm dying,
and nobody knows.
A lot of fucked up thoughts,
run through my head constantly.
I just wish I didn't live,
this life is misery!
 kfchater94 posted 一年多以前
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blackrose294 said:
Its ok.
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posted 一年多以前 
Lulu_Kururugi said:
i loved it, its sad but also understandebale. i have felt like that alot of times in my life
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posted 一年多以前 
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thank you.
kfchater94 posted 一年多以前
ISABELLA92 said:
I'm sorry that I never knew these things. I wish 你 would have told me 你 felt this horrible. I'd have done something different. I'm sorry that 你 couldn't tell me how 你 truly felt. I'm sorry I'm not here for you. I'm sorry that even through our friendship we couldn't talk about this. Mostly I'm sorry that I make 你 feel this way.
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posted 一年多以前 
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你 don't make me feel this way. The world does. Although I do live in your shadow which sucks. And our friendship has nothing to do with this.
kfchater94 posted 一年多以前
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Right now I'm just so angry at her. Not at you. So don't beat yourself up too bad. It's not 你 whose hurting me.
kfchater94 posted 一年多以前
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Message me we need to talk!
ISABELLA92 posted 一年多以前
Dream-On said:
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posted 一年多以前 
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asshole
kfchater94 posted 一年多以前
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I'll Take That as a Compliment
Dream-On posted 一年多以前
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whatever
kfchater94 posted 一年多以前
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:D
BeastBoyCahill posted 一年多以前
Kevy1 said:
I read this poem and imagine some rock 音乐 behind it and that was awesome. And I relate to it at some level.
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posted 一年多以前 
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thank you.
kfchater94 posted 一年多以前
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你 should make band 或者 something because it would be cool to hear your poem on radio I think it would be a hit.
Kevy1 posted 一年多以前
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Lol. Yeah that would be cool.
kfchater94 posted 一年多以前
BeastBoyCahill said:
Ummm... Well, that was... Cheery...
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posted 一年多以前 
xXitachiXx said:
I 爱情 it great job.
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posted 一年多以前 
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