if this was on the back cover of a book, would u read it?

I wouldn't. Because the grammar is horrible, the spelling as well. And it really detracted from my understanding of it. I would if it was something like this, I might.

"The world didn't end in fire, though it was a dazzling array of light. But it never went up in smoke. It did't freeze over, but it did shine. It shone ten-thousand times 更多 beautiful than a room filled with jewels, lights shining everywhere to further 显示 their beauty. No. The world. The earth and everything and everyone on it simply... Dissolved. Dissolved into a dazzling dance of 星, 星级 dust of all the 颜色 that could be defined, as well as thousands more."

Based on what I understood from this, that's what I thought was trying to be said.

Though this might be 更多 fitted to be a monologue of the main character. 或者 the prologue. :33

Wow that's beautiful. I would definitely read it!