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I NEED A POEM ABOUT OCEAN LIFE THAT IS 由 SOME 随意 PERSON AND NOT A WELL KNOWN POET. I NEED HELP!!

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lemme guess,you can't think of a poem to writre on your own?
PreBanned posted 一年多以前
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i got 1 look down
sassikassi posted 一年多以前
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If 你 use this as your homework, I'm gonna be FUMED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >:(
twilightrox43 posted 一年多以前
 fugiami posted 一年多以前
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sassikassi said:
how about this:

the ocean life is beautiful
as 你 can plainly see
its so amazing to see the creatures
that fascinate u n me

like it?please comment
支持 will also b gladly exceptd :D
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posted 一年多以前 
twilightrox43 said:
Um Im an unknown poet.. here... it doesnt rhyme though...

The unknown land,

known as the ocean,

has creatures the eye

has never seen.

The mysterious place,

that surrounds us all,

is teeming with life,

it is just not known of.

Someday maybe,

we shall see it's beauty,

but for now,

it remains untouched,

as it should be.
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 Um Im an unknown poet.. here... it doesnt rhyme though... The unknown land, known as the ocean, has creatures the eye has never seen. The mysterious place, that surrounds us all, is teeming with life, it is just not known of. Someday maybe, we shall see it's beauty, but for now, it remains untouched, as it should be.
posted 一年多以前 
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