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火影忍者 Fanfiction 问题

Will u read my story

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 Kibarules77 posted 一年多以前
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pokeaddict said:
I read your story.It was good.could use some editeding thought. I liked it though i'm parcialle to Ino/Choji
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posted 一年多以前 
sarumaneyarou said:
hmmmm... interesting story... unusual couple though, kibaino. well, there could have been a little 更多 detail though. at times it was a bit confusing. mind 你 you're better than me at that stuff. i can think up a story but just can't be bothered to type 或者 write it up...
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posted 一年多以前 
Kurama_CRAZY said:
Already readin' :P
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