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The last solstice

Chapter 23: Deadline



“Exactly who do 你 think 你 are?!” the Princess of the Night snapped at Mirage without any preliminary, as soon as she closed the large door of her office.

“Princess, I…” the stallion began.

“Silence!” Luna exclaimed, angrily raising her hoof. “Do 你 think you’re above me?! When I let 你 in to the menacing secret, I wasn’t expecting this! I was expecting achievements! It has been three weeks since your last 报道 and when I finally have the time and strength to trot up there, what do I see?!”

Mirage looked around in the room quickly, like if there was somepony else there who could help him out.

“I tell 你 what did I see.” the cobalt alicorn hissed and took a step toward Mirage. “I saw YOU, waltzing out of my sister’s room with a wide grin on your face, carefree of everything! Did 你 forget what’s at stake here?! DID YOU?!”

“No I haven’t!” Mirage called out on a high tone of voice, which overstepped the confines of respect.

However, the cutting edge of Luna’s words struck him in the chest. He wasn’t sure anymore if his last statement was still valid 或者 not. He also could not believe he spent three weeks up in the Ivory Tower. Could it be?

“What did 你 do up there?! What progress can 你 显示 me?!” Luna questioned mercilessly.

Mirage remained silent, and the Moon goddess took another step closer to him.

“Don’t 你 see?! I have put the fate of our entire race into your hooves! If 你 fail, everything will be 迷失 and I’m not going to stand 由 and let that happen! Not without a fight! What did 你 spend the precious time with?! SPEAK!!!”

“I was earning Celestia’s trust, your Highness!” the blue earth 小马 replied quietly.

“I sense confusion in you, but your words are true.” Luna softened a little after a long break.

“Please, Princess, 你 have to understand! This takes time and your sister’s soul is very fragile. I cannot urge her! One wrong 移动 and she breaks again and everything will be 迷失 as 你 said. I may have 迷失 control over the situation, but please give me another chance!” Mirage requested passionately.

“Hmm…” Luna murmured, rubbing her chin, seemingly 迷失 in thoughts. “All right. 你 may continue your work with my sister, but this time, I want proof of your progress.”

“What do 你 mean?”

“The solstice is near; we have two and a half months to be exact. 你 know what happens if my sister will not perform her royal duty until then. I want to meet with Celestia, muzzle to muzzle before that. 你 have exactly one 月 to make that happen!” the nocturnal alicorn raised her hoof once 更多 to silence Mirage’s protest. “This is not a matter of bargain. If 你 fail, I will pull 你 off the case and 你 will never see her again. Is that understood?”

“Yes… your Majesty…” Mirage gulped.

“Good. And remember! This is your last chance! In fact, this is everypony’s last chance!


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Nocturnal Mirage gazed upon the obsidian skies, studying the flickering stars. He was sitting like a statue, on Celestia’s balcony, beside him there was the solar alicorn and between them stood a golden telescope. Autumn has arrived and the coldness started to 显示 its sharp teeth, but the two ponies did not seem to be affected 由 it. It was almost midnight and the last lights of Canterlot slowly died out and the windows turned dark as the residents went to sleep. The sky was clear, not even a tiny 云, 云计算 kept the stars and the Moon to pour their cool white light on the landscape.

It was the perfect time for stargazing. At first, Mirage was surprised the Princess invited him to 加入 her for this nocturnal activity; therefore the confrontation with Luna occurred on the worst possible day. Never before Celestia allowed him to enter her suite at night, they always 说 goodbye in the evening, only to rejoin again early in the morning 下一个 day. The royal blue stallion understood this was a huge favor from the sun goddess and a sign of trust. Since Luna’s ultimatum, Mirage began to realize the full depths of his odd relationship with Celestia. The quarrel cleared his mind and even though he could not pull himself out of the solar alicorn’s aura, he was at least able to observe things from a rational point of view. He now comprehended what he achieved with the Princess, and despite Luna’s warning he began to accept the role of the apprentice beside Celestia. As he looked back on the past few weeks he recognized with surprise how close he felt to her. It seemed like he has known this strange mare in his entire life and assumed she must feel the same way about him. Why else she would be 表演 like this?

Although his mother, Summer Pride often came at night to haunt his dreams, Mirage began to doubt everything she had taught him about Celestia. He remembered his initial hatred towards her with shame. Summer always told him that the Princess was a tyrannical monster, a common war criminal, who destroyed King Sombra only because he wanted an independent Crystal Empire. But as the stallion kept looking at Celestia, he found nothing monstrous about her. On the contrary, he could not believe how could possibly somepony who’s so wise, sophisticated and kind be a tyrant?

“… and 你 see, over there… that’s the Ursa Minor!” Celestia 说 excitedly.

Mirage was so 迷失 in his thoughts he didn’t realize the solar Princess was talking to him for minutes.

“Excuse me, Princess?” Mirage shook his head.

“I said, if 你 look over there on the right, at two a clock, 你 can see the Ursa Minor constellation. It consists of seven stars; the brightest is called the Polaris… Oh my… I feel like I’m at the School for Gifted 独角兽 teaching young fillies and colts, ha ha!” Celestia chuckled.

The sound she made was short, yet it came from the 心 and it was new. Mirage never heard it before; probably the Princess herself didn’t do it in over a decade.

“I hope I’m not boring you… 你 seemed to 显示 some interest in astronomy, that’s why I thought we could watch the stars together. I haven’t done it in a long time.” the white alicorn 说 softly.

“No, no, please continue. It is very interesting.” Mirage replied quietly.

“All right. So, about the Polaris… it’s 360 light years from our planet…”

But her words did not reach Mirage’s brain, for he kept gazing at Celestia, trying to pick up the 前一个 thread of his thoughts. Her voice filled his ears with a pleasing resonance and she was utterly indulged in her presentation. In this uplifted condition she forgot about her billowing mane and the fluorescent hair returned to its natural position, no longer covering her old wounds. Even though it was dark, the black scars were clearly visible on her snow white 涂层, 外套 which reflected the moonlight. Mirage tried to look away but it was attracting his eye and aroused his curiosity once again. It was the first time he could observe the scars from this close and Celestia wasn’t paying attention. The most severe injuries covered the right side of her chest and her face, but her ear, eyelid, hoof and neck were also affected.

It seems something burned the flesh long ago… the cobalt stallion thought. But in that moment, the Princess of the Sun snatched his vision. The enthusiastic smile immediately vanished and her features darkened. Mirage knew he made a fatal mistake, before Celestia opened her mouth to speak.

“It’s always about the scars, isn’t it?” she asked sadly, her voice was barely audible.

“No, no, I…” Mirage began but was silenced 由 an alicorn the 秒 time this day.

“I felt something was depressing 你 the entire night… but I thought…” Celestia 说 as her mane slowly floated around her body, covering her wounds again. “I thought we’re passed this…”

“No, Princess, 你 are mistaken! We are… I… It’s just…” Mirage stuttered, desperately seeking for the right words.

“Go now.” the sun goddess 说 coldly.

“Please, listen to me! It’s not what 你 think!” Mirage countered in frustration for he was forced to explain himself twice this day.

“I 说 LEAVE!” Celestia yelled, her voice almost reaching the regions of the Royal Canterlot Voice.

“Let me explain…”

“LEAVE!!!” the alicorn stood up, menacingly towering on the smaller earth pony. “GET OUT! 你 WILL NEVER HAVE TO LOOK UPON THIS MONSTER!”

Sinister storm clouds appeared on the sky from nowhere, even though Mirage didn’t see the golden magical aura around Celestia’s horn. He assumed the dark cumulus was created 由 her pure anger. He saw no other choice then to comply with her demands and quickly ran out of her suite fearing for his life. The door closed behind him with a loud bang and he remained alone in the dark hallway. He tried to get back inside but he bumped into an invisible repulsive wall. He doubled his efforts, even summoning upon his unique terra-magic, but the odd force got 更多 solid and 更多 powerful with every attempt. The royal blue stallion flopped down on the cold marble floor, gasping for air. He lay still for several hours in front of the door, but even from there he could hear Celestia’s violent sobs, coming from her bedroom.
posted by mariofan14
As-a we catch up on-a the griffon, we-a also see 彩虹 Dash chasing her, but also being as silent as-a can be. The griffon then makes a stop, but where? An 苹果 cart, the exact one she-a 偷了 from, but-a why? She had to-a pay for-a what she-a took. Slowly, but surely, Rainbow's suspicion grew.

Along came Pinkie Pie, who-a was trotting along down
the bustling town streets, until she-a bumped into Gilda. "AAAAHHHHH!!!" She-a ran away, but-a Gilda went after her, and-a the 彩虹 pegasus flies after the griffon, still being silent.

Gilda soon got a hold of-a Pinkie Pie. "What do 你 want from...
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The beginning of this story starts with a song. It will go back to Fluttershy's perspective in the 下一个 part.
.....
Queen Chrysalis
*walking through Ponyville as Fluttershy*
Not that I'm back,
No 小马 shall stop me
From the attack
Of my minions of changlings


Fluttershy
*running through Everfree forest*
I must stop her
From wreaking havoc
On Ponyville
And if I don't
It will be tragic


Q.C.
Soon, and very soon
Every 小马 shall see
I will once again
Reign supreme


Fluttershy
I must get
Out very soon
或者 else Pony-
ville will be doomed

*makes it out of Everfree forest*

Q.C.
*arrives at 彩虹 Dash's house*
Now this is where things get....

Fluttershy
Oh goodness this isn't....

Q.C. and Fluttershy
Fun!
.....
posted by drwhoovesluvr
My Little Pony: Friendship is magic 
Derpy returns
Written by: Drwhoovesluvr
Scene 1:The Bin
(fan save derpy)

Derpy:
 Hi. My name is Derpy Hooves. I used to be loved 由 many. I made them laugh. Then one 日 I decided to come out and talk to them.
(tears up)
They called me names: stupid, retarded, offensive
(tear drops)
I just don't know what went wrong. 
(another tear)
I'm sorry every pony. 
(sniffles a lot)
I-I-It's okay. It's okay-
(Pinky jumps in)

Pinky Pie:
Actually yes! It is!

Derpy:
Wha-?

Pinky Pie:
Celestia says that 嘿 apologized! She's giving 你 a 松饼 商店 right 下一个 to my 杯形饼, 蛋糕 shop!  OMG and 你 get to have me throw 你 a party!!!!
(Derpy glows as Pinky walks her back to Equestria from the "Bin")
.....
The 下一个 day, I was feeling much better. I still couldn't fly because of my wing, though. So I just stayed in my house and played with Angel. "I wish my wing would heal already, Angel."

"I think I could help." Twilight Sparkle came in.


I turned to face her. "What do 你 mean?"

"I know a spell that could heal your wing."

"Really? Do it! Do it, please!"

"Okay, okay." Twilight closed her eyes and her horn started to glow.

I saw my left wing glow, too. "It's working!" I started flapping my wings together. "Thank you, Twilight!"

"You're wel-"

I flew out of my house at lightning speed. "Must. Find....
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Lightning was striking below. Thank Celestia all the ponies were 安全 inside. I was flying close enough to feel the heat of the lightning. To hear the loudness of the thunder. I loved it. Just then I got a brilliant idea. I remember AJ 说 that it was too dangerous to stay at 苹果 Acres because of the trees; so I decided to run through the Everfree Forest! It's, like I 说 before, brilliant! I landed at the the entrance of it. "Bring it on", I 说 to myself. I started running through the forest as fast as I could, lightning bolts striking a few trees that were in front of me.

Not dangerous...
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First things first, thank 你 to anyone who reads this. Okay, so this is a continuation of The Journey of the New Brony 文章 I wrote a few weeks back. So, while watching Dragon Quest, I noticed even 更多 similarities between the events of the episode and the common new brony's experiences. Let me once again make them into a list. But because this is part 2, remember that the person is already a brony.

1. 你 go to hang out with people who should be your friends.
2. Something happens, and 你 admit to being a brony.
3. They make fun of you.
4. 你 try to prove that it hasn't majorly changed you.
5. 你 do prove it.
6. 你 hang out again.
7. They still don't approve of ponies, 或者 粉丝 of ponies.
8. 你 discover who your true 老友记 are through ponies.

Yeah, it's not as good as my last one, but I wanted to share my thoughts anyway. Please give me feedback, I want to write the best 文章 I can, which I can't do if I don't know what I'm doing wrong. Anyway, triq267 out.
posted by whiteclaw
"This is it, our first ration!!!" cried Sweetie Belle. They searched the area for traps and mines, punks would often set up these so they could get rid of any theives trying to steal they`re rations. "Are 你 sure this is a real one this time?" asked Appleloom. "It has to be, let`s hope for good luck." she 说 with hope.




They opened the black and blue box, hoping it wouldn`t activate a trap. "THERE THEY ARE!!! KILL `EM, FOR THE CAVE!!!" Scootaloo grabbed the box and ran, BOOM!!! a smoke mine went off choking Scootaloo. She fell to the ground, still cluching the box in between her hooves....
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posted by shadowknuxgirl
"This is the only place I imagine they could be..." Rarity explained as they walked up to Fluttershy's cottage. Twilight opened the door, without knocking. The problem didn't call for "politeness". Inside they saw Applebloom, but screamed at what they saw. It looked as if Applebloom was missing something. Her head. At the sound of the scream, Applebloom quickly raised her head off the ground, and turned to the door entrance. Twilight and Rarity's screams quickly faded, seeing as Applebloom's head was still in-tact with her body, just at an angle where they couldn't see it. Fluttershy then flew...
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Fellow Bronies and Pegasisters, hear me be. I have an idea for a new series of fanfics, but I want to hear your opinion from it.

I know that there already is a fanfic with the horrors of War with Ponies out there, but I want to write another fic with War in it. Now, what I want to hear is, is this a great idea, 或者 is it plain plagiarism?

It's an issue that keeps on bugging me. For the ones who want to know what the story is going to be like, let's just say that some Humans find the Portal to Equestria and that they don't have good intentions for the inhabitants of that world. Now, it's not going...
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So, I've been thinking of this for a while, but now I'm gonna put it into words. In the episode Read It and Weep, there are many comparisons to be made between 彩虹 Dash and a new brony's journeys. Let me explain with a generic model that fits both stories.

1. A trusted friend suggests 你 try a form of entertainment that 你 normally wouldn't try.
2. After much thought, 你 reluctantly give in.
3. 你 begin to get interested, and realize that 你 enjoy it.
4. 你 feel embaressed and hide it from your friends.
5. 你 find yourself partaking in it any chance 你 get, and when 你 aren't doing...
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Chapter 7: Twilight Sparkle
    I wistfully watched as Spring hurried away. “And she seemed like such a sweet girl…” Rarity sighed.
    “We need to get away, fast.” 彩虹 nodded at the now-stirring Trixie. So we shot away, our hooves pounding on the ground.
    We found shelter in a hollow boulder in the middle of the forest where the village was. Rarity’s eyes flashed briefly. She hated boulders, ever since that Tom incident…
    “It’ll have to do for now, I suppose,” she muttered as she sat...
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The Mayor stood behind the curtain, waiting for it to lift up. She had 给 many speeches before, but a speech about murders? She had spoken to her citizens about disasters in the past. But nothing to this extent.



CRASH!!! "Derpy! What did I tell 你 about coming behind stage? You`re supposed to lift the curtain not handle the stage lights." snapped the Mayor. "I`m sorry, I dun`t know wat da problem es?!" replied the Pegasus. Then she lifted the curtaon as she was instructed.



The crowd cheered and applauded, as the Mayor made her way to the podium. She took a deep breath, and grabbed her...
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posted by Tawnyjay
DEWY SHINE

Dewy Shine is a very smart and resourceful pegasus. She cares a lot about what others think of her intelligence, and is very offended if anyone 问题 her. She's mostly nice, but if 你 insult her intellect...

MIDNIGHT OWL

Midnight Owl is very quiet and sweet. She is the assistant to Princess Luna, and is very easily stressed out and depressed. She is a unicorn.

TROLLSPARK

Technically, this is my friend's FC, but she let me write it on here.
Trollspark is a naughty unicorn with unusually strong magic. She enjoys causing distress among the citizens of Ponyville, though if they tell...
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posted by AquoMoon
Once Twilight woke up in 城堡 Oblivion she found the card to go through the door and a piece of paper and a quil pen, so she wrote the letter to all her 老友记 in ponyville
to come rescue her. Twilight wondered about the card that Axel gave her then the stallion came and asked her,"So are 你 ready for another trip?" "Yes I am can 你 wait a few minuets Axel?" asked Twilight nicely the satlliuon answered back,"I am not Axel but 你 could wait a few minuets before your 老友记 come, here I'll use the corriador of Darkness to summon them here."

Once the stallion summoned the corriador all...
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posted by Katie_Kat200
First chapter... of a lot XD. This is act 1... the cave times, when things were simpler and ponies had to hunt for the 食物 (no they weren't meat eaters.... really...) This is actually a 粉丝 fiction based on events that happened through world history and the ponies being placed in them. So its like History 粉丝 Fiction 或者 something. I don't know... So enjoy this first chapter :3


Twilight Sparkle peeked out of her 图书馆 cave into the sunshine. It was morning and she had been buried in her blanket all night after a cold night. She looked around. Just another 日 in Ponyville… 7000 BCE.

“Stalagspike!”...
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 Just for 你 guys x3
Just for you guys x3
The news of 照片 Finish`s death was absoulotely terrible, Hoity Toity had been mourning for days non-stop. He was just about to blow his nose when his assistant knocked on the door. "Enter 你 may!" he said, the was holding a clipboard against his chest. "Sir 你 have exactly two hours before showtime are 你 ready?" Toity nodded. "Alright I`ll see 你 there si-" he was cut off. Hoity looked down, he had been stabbed and the 刀 was poking through the clipboard. Behind him was a blue 小马 with a mask and outfit on.









The assasin closed the door behind him, "Why?! What do 你 want?!" Toity...
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posted by ILOVEMLPs
Hello 小马 fans!With help from my dad, I am planning to create an ULTIMATE 小马 CREATOR!!!!!
This 小马 creator will be nothing like anything that 你 have ever seen before!It may take a few months to make, but I am working on it a quickly as possible.This 小马 creator will have EVERYTHING!!
You will be able to turn the 小马 in a different direction. 你 will be able to get different outfits and hats and stuff. 你 will also be able to do the following things: 设计 your own clothes,
choose objects from the real movie, Choose from the provided cutie marks 或者 make one yourself,have 更多 than 2...
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The blue pegasus flew through the air, she was used to this routine. She kept a watchful eye out for anything that moved. She saw a 鼠, 大鼠 about half her size, scurry across a pile of dead roaches. She thought of Rarity, how would she survive in this dump? She laughed and tryed to land softly, she crashed and cursed at herself. She wished she hadn`t dropped out of flight school. She brushed herself off and trotted forward.






She smelled something awful, it was the worst stench she had ever smelled. She walked over to it`s 来源 and found a horid sight. The decaying body of a teenage pony. With...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
I was bringing in a freight from Albany, when I saw Bartholomew leaving the yards in a switcher.

Skywalker: *Stops train in Croton West Yard* 嘿 Ten Cents. Where's he going?
Ten Cents: Back to the station. It'll be time for him to go 首页 soon.
Skywalker: Okay.
Bartholomew: *Stops engine at servicing facility* Good thing the facility is near the train station.
Lady: *Driving electric train northbound*
Zorran: Alright, get that bridge down!
Zebedee: *Driving tug, and trying to pull down bridge*
Zug: *Doing the same*
Captain Zero: Pull harder for crying out loud!
Lady: *Sees tugboats* Whatever they're...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Michael, and Debbie stayed outside to play with their dad, and Hawkeye went inside to make the phone call.

Hawkeye: *Calling Cheyenne Trainstation*
Pete: *Hears phone ring, and answers* Cheyenne Trainstation of the Union Pacific. Pete Reimer speaking.
Hawkeye: Pete, it's me Pierce.
Pete: What have 你 been up to?
Hawkeye: My train has been derailed. Could 你 send some cranes over to get them back on the tracks?
Pete: I already did. Percy, and Jeff will be there too. They're gonna inspect the track.
Hawkeye: Okay good. Thank you. *Hangs up*
Grandfather: *Comes downstairs* How did 你 get in my...
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