My own song!!!((A place with no name))

I just wrote a song called ((A Place With No Name)).The inspiration and 标题 came to me 由 MJ's own ((A place with no name)).It's a slow and dramatic song.Lyrics are under.So after 阅读 tell me what 你 think even if it's BAD!!!
(This song is dedicated to Jill_17)

I look at this house with curisity,Something is making me stop,I look at the house,trying to know this place,trying to find out what these are.
But it seems that there's nothing to help me.
I look around this place,but there is no name
It's like a white horse with no name

(2 Times)And this place has no name either

(Chorus)(4 times)A place with no name
I go inside the place,looking for clues,but i find nothing there to help me,i look around,to find something,but then i see a mirror,then i see the ((MAN IN THE MIRROR))
I then try to stop looking at the mirror,but it keeps 展示 me the past,but i can't take it no 更多 and i break it.
I go out to see the light,but then my mind starts to remember,looking at the place in wonder the place looks familiar to my mind,it looks familiar to my mind.

(Chorus)(4 Times)A Place With No Name

The place is familiar to my mind,making me to remember,but then something glows in the house,makes me go inside the house,i go in,looking around,but i find 你 petrified,i find 你 there paralyzed,you've been waiting for me all this time,waiting for me to come back,but i need 你 now 更多 than ever,i need 你 to come 由 my side,i need 你 back 由 my side,forever,i need 你 ((For all time)).

(Chorus)(4 Times)A Place with no name

It's like ((A horse with no name))
I need 你 由 my side,i need 你 to help me,help me remember,but 你 seem paralyzed,i see the blood on the floor,i want to know ((Who is it))?
Who is ruining my life?Trying to eradicate me?
But it all comes back to me,i now know this whole place,But if 你 even don't answer me i want 你 to know...
((I 爱情 you))