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Hey, I don't know if 你 guys know but I am 写作 a story called "Our New Life Together (MJ Story Thriller Era). I wanted to know if 你 guys wouldn't mind checking it out. Plus I would like to thank the people who have read the 文章 and that have left comments. Thank you. Tell me what 你 think and trust me there will be more. Thank you. God Bless