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My Earth 日 poem.. i wrote it in feburary and i had Mr.Thriller in mind when i wrote it. Do 你 like it. No negative 评论 unless its creative critisism:)

What is this we've done.
Don't 你 realize what I, Me, You, Us, We have done to THEE.
Our 首页 for ever with no where else to go, the end of the road.
Go ahead drink the water, its' tates comes from you.
Fine as wine the air has Just the right amount of smoke and here I will choke with your factories blowing steam and your money making machines.
WE are destroying OUR selves, but it's okay.
someone will fix it right? They'll figure out something?
They'll figure out....
oh they....
NO! they who?
WE are they, and They created this disater so they shall help fix it.
Green is the color of our world no going back with it's filthy sources going black.
How about 你 over there, Mr.Millionaire.
help us re-love the planet and re-build the world.
Peoples' success up there nose, Money is the answer to it all i suppose.
No?
Then what is?
there's other children that want toys and clothes, plants and 动物 also have a need for their population to grow.
We must have forgotten about love.
L.O.V.E
你 hate me.
I hate you.
Unexceptable.
I shall not take, I shall not take 或者 let the world recieve hate.
Go ahead burn down another forest, but when 你 chop down that 树 I hope you're thinking of me when there's no 更多 air to breathe and 你 all will wonder, how could this be?
I'll tell 你 how.
Never mind, I already did.
Open up your hearts and realize the life we live.

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i have 更多 on www.allpoetry.com/RobynnIvory
ilovetheWORLD posted 一年多以前
 ilovetheWORLD posted 一年多以前
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peterslover said:
This is beautifully written. Well done. People don't realize that they are; we, us, I, me. WE are all responsible for the planet. And 你 shared that thought very well in your poem. 你 should send your poem to the "Readers Digest" magazine. I think they would like to print it! I'm posting this most beautiful 照片 of a patch of green that is untouched 由 man, except for the dirt road.
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 This is beautifully written. Well done. People don't realize that they are; we, us, I, me. WE are all responsible for the planet. And 你 shared that thought very well in your poem. 你 should send your poem to the "Readers Digest" magazine. I think they would like to print it! I'm posting this most beautiful 照片 of a patch of green that is untouched 由 man, except for the dirt road.
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K5-HOWL said:
This poem was totally awesome like wicked! Wuv it :3
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 This poem was totally awesome like wicked! Wuv it :3
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Beautiful pic!!!!!!!! <3
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caligurl16 said:
I 爱情 it! Beautiful!
I feel the same way...
<3
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liberiangirl_mj said:
I 爱情 your poem!! 你 write it in a beautiful way.. and is so true...
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 I 爱情 your poem!! 你 write it in a beautiful way.. and is so true...
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2468244 said:
*clap clap clap clap* AWESOME!!!!!! i 爱情 it!!! Mr. Thriller would too!!!!! 爱情 爱情 爱情 爱情 爱情 爱情 爱情 爱情 爱情 IT!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox to u <3
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reneemonique said:
hehe i like your 街, 街道 name for michael,Mr.Thriller good one:)
Absalutly gob-smaked,its very well written,      ilovetheWORLD. I liked how 你 added simple things like 爱情 and Hate,children,forests,life and Hearts. Most of the things that Michael sang about,he'd be very proud and yes we all are kind of responsible for our world,earth and many of us dont,it teaches a great lesson:)<3 xx
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 hehe i like your 街, 街道 name for michael,Mr.Thriller good one:) Absalutly gob-smaked,its very well written, ilovetheWORLD. I liked how 你 added simple things like 爱情 and Hate,children,forests,life and Hearts. Most of the things that Michael sang about,he'd be very proud and yes we all are kind of responsible for our world,earth and many of us dont,it teaches a great lesson:)<3 xx
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wow 爱情 the pic!
evanescence_ posted 一年多以前
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