the story starts on the first 日 on Isle Esme, where bella and edward have their honeymoon. (the first part in italics is taken from breaking dawn, to let the story flow)


He placed the suitcases on the dock and then turned nack, wmiling his perfect smile as he reached for me. Instead of taking my hand, he pulled me right up into his arms.
"Aren't 你 supposed to wait for the threshold?" I asked, breathless, as he sprung lightly out of the boat.
He grinned. "I'm nothing if not thorough."
Gripping the handles of both huge steamer trunks in one hand and cradling me in the other arm, he carried me up the dock and onto a pale sand pathway through the dark vegetation.
Edward stopped, his lips curling into a leer, he slowly looked down at my expectant and curious face.
"What's the matter?" I asked warily, scanning his breathtaking face with my eyes, waiting for him to start moving again.
"Nothing. I just wanted to take a little detour through the forest. There's something i want 你 to see." He 说 in an excited tone.
"Okay," I said, smiling blissfully as i tucked my face against his chest, inhaling his unique scent.
Edward broke into a run. I closed my eyes as the warm, humid air rushed past my ears. I couldn't have been happier than i was at that moment, safely nested in my true love's arms with nothing in to world that could possibly worry me.
Except when he looked down into my eyes.
He had come to a stop. we were in the middle of the jungle with the liquid moonlight filtering down through the dense foilage. His eyes were black. Pitch black. The blackest they'd ever been.
I gasped, my 心 pounding inside my chest. He heard it, of course. His leer grew bigger, twisting his angelic face into one that i didn't know.
This wan't my Edward. Not the one that i fell in 爱情 with, not the one i had gotten married to just a few hours ago.
But it was Edward.
"Ah, Bella," he mocked me in a quiet voice, "Bella, Bella, Bella. What a fool 你 are..."
I stared up at him in disbelief, uncomprehending. My lungs felt like they'd been punctured; every gulp of air i took trickled straight through the holes. My head was spinnning, my vision flickering between Edward's twisted face and total blackness. A blackness as deep as his eyes.
"I--,"
He interrupted me, his arms tightening around my tense body as he spoke, "Bella, I am a vampire. I cannot run from my nature. I was designed for this." He inhaled deeply.
No.
NO! This couldn't be happening. Edward loved me. I loved Edward. We were meant for eachother. I MARRIED him, for God's sake!
We were moving again, his feet stepping silently on the dead leaves underfoot.
"Look around 你 Bella. This is where it ends. This is where you end." he said, chuckling at my blank expression. "Did 你 really think that I, a designed killer, could resist your blood 由 merely loving you?" He spat out the word like it was something vile, unworthy of his attention.
He lowered me down, away from his body. I felt something hard and cold at my back.
Edward never took his eyes away from mine as he lowered his icy lips down to my shoulder. I felt my skin break.
"NO!! Edward! I 爱情 you! What are 你 doing?! What--" I screamed as the first spasm of pain ripped through me. My arm was on fire. The 火, 消防 spread to my chest, tearing my insides to shreds.
He chuckled. "Goodbye Bella, my love."
My horrified eyes fixed on his face. Through a river of pain, so intense it was beyond screams and whimpers, I were his eyes, turning a gory shade of red. His lips glistening with my blood.
The last thing i saw was a huge something blotting out the moon. I heard snarl, a howl, and everything went black.
Even in my state of total, unbearable pain, I could feel the heat. The familiar heat of someone hovering over me. Someone i loved. Jacob.
I regained conciousness slowly. I was drifting between two worlds. One that i was born in, and one full of blissful quiet that deadened all the senses into a state of oblivion.
I eyelids fluttered. I felt something shifting under me.
"Bella? Bella! Oh, Bella. Bella, can 你 hear me? Bella!" A voice said, somewhere above my head. I felt drops of hot liquid splattering onto my face.
The heat burned as it made contact with my cold skin. Too cold. Oh, no...
I was a vampire.
My eyes were suddenly open. I frantically looked around me. I was in the rainforest, lying on a cracked stone slab.
I gasped. The colours! they were so bright! everything was so clear! I reached over and touched a leaf, my sensitive fingers able to count the microscopic little hairs that grew out of it. I heard the warm sloshing of a beating 心 behind me. I froze and slowly turned around to face him. Jacob.
"Bella?" he asked warily, eyes widening.
I opened my mouth to answer him, but nothing came out. I stared at him in complete shock.
He was covered from head to foot in long, deep gashes. I could see the white of a rib poking through one of them.
"Bella, he's dead. I killed him. I killed Edward." His voice was heavy with exhaustion.
"Edward? What-- How--" I managed to choke out.
"He was going to kill you, Bella," he whispered. "I couldn't save you..." Jacob gestured weakly at my changed body. His hopeless face looked at me with wide eyes, tears streaming anew down his cheeks, mingling with the blood.
My nostrils flared. I could smell it. It smelled disgusting, like a wet dog, only ten times worse. Nevertheless, my throat burned with thirst.

Right, that was my own version of the beginning of the end of the twilight series (if that makes sense) my 写作 isn't as good as stephenie meyer's, but i did my best (this is like the first thing i've ever written)
Anyway, tell me what 你 think! its up to 你 to decide what happens next:

~~Jacob imprinted on bella when he saw her as a vampire, he 'fixes' her broken 心 over the course of many years, both of them not ageing. Bella never really gets over what happened, but they decide to stay together (vamp/werewolf combo!)they live happily ever after. 火, 消防 and Ice.
~~Bella is overcome with guilt and depression of having to live with it forever (being immortal, this could be really horrible for her) and seeks out the Volturi to end her pain. Jacob is devastated and gives up his human for for the rest of his existance


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