Teenage Renesme

this is chapter three. like it says in the title. Im re editing my entire story and this is the edited version, Hope 你 like it. Send me a prop. tell me if 你 like it and how i could change it.

“Renesmee what’s wrong?” Samantha asked.
“Jacob.” I 说 with a hiss.
“Who is Jacob?” Chris asked with a smirk.
“Not who 你 think he is Chris.” I 说 annoyed.
“He has been a friend of my mo… aunt for years he is closer to my age though. My boyfriend goes to school on the reservation.”
“Then why do 你 look so distressed Renesmee?” Samantha asked worriedly.
“he never finished...

My first class was biology. My teacher, Mr. Banner, called me to the front of the room for an introduction. I just don’t understand why teachers don’t let kids make their own introductions.
“This is Renesmee Cullen. Her Grandfather works at the hospital. Please let her feel welcome. Miss Cullen please take a 座位 behind Ms. Weber.”
I walked to my 座位 aware of the stares.
“Hi. I'm Samantha. Welcome to the worst place on earth 或者 as the school board refers to it as Forks High School.” The girl said
“Well it was hell trying not to come to here, but 你 know family.” I joked.
“Well...