This is a song I'm writing, thinking about Huddy. I need opinions. Should I add another verse and chorus? Is it okay where it is? I feel like it's still not quite finished, but I need some ideas. I have a basic melody in my head that I just need to get written down. Anything 你 could do to give me ideas would be greatly appreciated. *THERE IS ONE BAD WORD* Thank You.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
你 说 that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made 你 cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to 移动 on
And I am loosing you
你 迷失 your faith in me
And 说 that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I 爱情 you.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
你 说 that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made 你 cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to 移动 on
And I am loosing you
你 迷失 your faith in me
And 说 that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I 爱情 you.
When does 爱情 become something we need, rather than something we want? 爱情 was seen as something special a long time ago. Now 爱情 is what we are expected to have with us everyday of our lives. 爱情 is common currency when 你 are a teenager, but turns to worthless pennies the older 你 get. Do we not care about the substance of what 爱情 was and not what it has been made into today 由 commercialisation from American 电影院 and 电视 commercials and soap operas? Only when we experience 爱情 for real, can we 评论 and judge others who are in Love. 爱情 means something different to everyone. Not two people’s feeling of 爱情 is the same. Why do we generalize, rationalize and compartmentalize Love? 爱情 is and will continue to be an enigma. Only a handful of people will ever unlock it and witness its true beauty and essence. The essence we all crave.
Love.
Love.