This is a song I'm writing, thinking about Huddy. I need opinions. Should I add another verse and chorus? Is it okay where it is? I feel like it's still not quite finished, but I need some ideas. I have a basic melody in my head that I just need to get written down. Anything 你 could do to give me ideas would be greatly appreciated. *THERE IS ONE BAD WORD* Thank You.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
你 说 that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made 你 cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to 移动 on
And I am loosing you
你 迷失 your faith in me
And 说 that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I 爱情 you.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
你 说 that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made 你 cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to 移动 on
And I am loosing you
你 迷失 your faith in me
And 说 that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell 你 everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I 爱情 you.
House to Cuddy point of view (House's POV):
You're hopelessly lost, because today
The world seems a bit too big for you
I was pretty sure I've seen it all
Until 你 came, opened up my heaven
And ironically my hell
I get torn down
You're glad to get torn down with me
Well that's something I've never seen
It seems that I'm a bit wrong about the world
As of toady
Because 你 came and showed me wrong
你 take me down, 你 bring me up
Well, at least 你 made a change
Despite the things 你 cannot see
Despite the world attire
And despite the truths 你 wish to change
你 hide well, that i have to admit
But I can see right through you.
You're hopelessly lost, because today
The world seems a bit too big for you
I was pretty sure I've seen it all
Until 你 came, opened up my heaven
And ironically my hell
I get torn down
You're glad to get torn down with me
Well that's something I've never seen
It seems that I'm a bit wrong about the world
As of toady
Because 你 came and showed me wrong
你 take me down, 你 bring me up
Well, at least 你 made a change
Despite the things 你 cannot see
Despite the world attire
And despite the truths 你 wish to change
你 hide well, that i have to admit
But I can see right through you.