情绪硬核 Hi, bye, why?, lies, what?, life!

deathnote posted on Jan 27, 2009 at 10:30PM
Hi my friend, how are you today?
I have so much things to say
Bye my friend, but I'm not fine
I'll get to see you this last time

Why my friend? and you look alright
take life as if it were slight
Lies my friend, that's why you can't see
how much this "life" has done to me

What? my friend, I can't comprehend
the message that you are trying to send
Life my friend, that's what I pretend
it keeps people away like you, that don't understand.


Just thought of this poem few days ago..

last edited on Jan 27, 2009 at 10:31PM

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一年多以前 angelx2 said…
surprise
that was a little wierd but niceish
一年多以前 angy7sdg said…
blush
i like it...!i have to read it to twice to really get what u are trying yo say.. =)
一年多以前 deathnote said…
Thanks :)
一年多以前 Jasperluver11 said…
I also really like it...:)
一年多以前 Rupa said…
wink
its so awesom ...................lol
 its so awesom ...................lol
一年多以前 deathnote said…
surprise
thanks wow :) now that i look back i love this poem of mine :)