is this a good peom thing

Lying, dying shamefully. Killing, living regretfully. Smoking death into your lungs. Killing souls of everyone. The time will come when 你 will see. Just what you've turned out to be. The monster underneath your bed. The depressing thought inside my head. The waging war throughout the land. The one who swore to take my hand. 你 tore my 心 in little bits. 你 lied and made me feel like shit. 你 turned the world against me now. 你 broke our only swear, our vow. The loving memory of my soul remains. The only thing you've yet to gain