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ZERG1994s NEWEST MAYBE GREATEST POEM YET! !-read it now

Rain, rain go away
BEcause of 你 the pain will stay
Slit my throat, cu out my heart,
Leave me here, tear it apart.

Poisen tears stream down my face,
My 心 beats at a steady pace,
As I try to stand again;
Alone and standing in the rain.

I dont 你 need 你 anymore...
Is what I think while tears pour,
I hate 你 like I hate life;
But 爱情 is what cuts like a knife.

爱情 is death;and death is you
Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again
And bind me in the ropes of pain.

Crimson blood streams down my head,
like a long, silk ribbon, tied 由 a thread.
To a platimum bullet hole in my skull..

Now just a memory thats faded and dull

Thankyou, for 阅读 this poem and encouraging me to go further.

Dont forget to add me as a 粉丝 if 你 like it :P




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thanks guys
zerg1994 posted 一年多以前
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omg amazing
Paramore-CSI posted 一年多以前
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Wow very nice
Hidanfan posted 一年多以前
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AWESOME
NERO1186 posted 一年多以前
 zerg1994 posted 一年多以前
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Frizzhead said:
I 爱情 the originality and feeling in this. It is one of a kind
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posted 一年多以前 
greeneyedvamp said:
OMG!! 你 have such talent. i can feel your pain. wow. o am in shock right now. what 你 说 is so deep. i would 爱情 to hear 更多 if 你 dont mind sharing.
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posted 一年多以前 
MrsPattinsonXO said:
I like it. XX
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posted 一年多以前 
Little_Cullen said:
Me too. Very passionate.
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posted 一年多以前 
Rockgrl said:
you've out done yourself again
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posted 一年多以前 
lilred96 said:
awsome
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posted 一年多以前 
GWENxTRENT said:
i like it! i fell that way sometimes...
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posted 一年多以前 
Mallory101 said:
Hey! 你 copied my poem!
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posted 一年多以前 
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dude he did copie your poem
lilred96 posted 一年多以前
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Yeah !
Mallory101 posted 一年多以前
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