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I will become a 粉丝 of 你 if u become 粉丝 of me? heres one of my poems.

I’m standing up.
My eyes at shut.
Darkness is around me.
I can feel that their is some one in front of me.
I can feel their breath on me.
I’m afraid to open my eyes.
I can feel their eyes looking in to my soul
I’m afraid of what they will see.
My darkness, my hope, my dreams, my fear, every thing that makes me me.
I open my eyes and I’m looking in the mirror.
I’m afraid of myself.
Is life worth living if 你 are your own enemy.
I fight with my self every 日 and I all ways lose.
I come 首页 bleeding and thinking of death.
I cant wait to death comes and gets me Ill greet it with open arms.
Until then ill just have to hope
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beautiful xx
Silver_Sword posted 一年多以前
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ill be your 粉丝 message me when 你 can on 情绪硬核
vinson posted 一年多以前
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i agree with silver_sword
NERO1186 posted 一年多以前
 zerg1994 posted 一年多以前
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Mela1994 said:
It's good, i like it :)
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posted 一年多以前 
samjhart said:
its brilliant! :) keep them coming! X
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posted 一年多以前 
Rockgrl said:
OMFG! U've got f-ing talent dude! I dont even think my 诗歌 is good now! U have got to write 更多 of that
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posted 一年多以前 
laspanglish said:
i <3 it bbz xx sure ill become a fan!ur a reeli gr8 poet,iv nevr actually tried 2 write poems,but wen i do they always seem,well,grim ,kinda.sad an...yeah :/
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posted 一年多以前 
hassleberrygirl said:
Good super
A ghost
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posted 一年多以前 
strawberry19 said:
THIS P0EM IS S0 G00D!!!! KEEP 写作 THEM<3
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posted 一年多以前 
dylin1 said:
Beautiful poem. 你 totally described me, BTW
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posted 一年多以前 
xxjadehxx said:
I Acually 爱情 This Poem xx
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