Ok, so I wrote this a long time ago. I think it sucks! What do 你 think? Please comment, I know it's bad but please don't me mean. I probably wrote it when I was about 12 或者 13. If 你 have any suggestions I would 爱情 to hear them. But like I 说 please don't leave mean comments. If 你 are wondering what it's about....I have no idea. It was just a 随意 thing I wrote in about 5 或者 10 minutes.
Melting Hearts
Your 心 melts
All that's inside of you
just goes all away
Nothing to do
你 feel dead on
the inside
你 can hardly breathe
你 fall away slowly
It feels like the end
of the world
你 have no
hope left
你 hope that it will
be better
but now your not sure
Hearts melting all
around 你 going
through hell
Do 你 care?
Melting Hearts
Your 心 melts
All that's inside of you
just goes all away
Nothing to do
你 feel dead on
the inside
你 can hardly breathe
你 fall away slowly
It feels like the end
of the world
你 have no
hope left
你 hope that it will
be better
but now your not sure
Hearts melting all
around 你 going
through hell
Do 你 care?