It's nice. I would recommend working on coloring since it's uneven and somewhat sloppy-looking in a few places, most noticeably the dress. One eye is also significantly darker than the other.
Also maybe make her skin a little bit darker as it sort of melts into the white 毛皮 of her dress making it hard to see where the 毛皮 starts and her neck ends. (Of course this might just be because of the lighting.)
总体, 整体 just focus on being consistent and neat with your coloring and lineart; everything else looks good. :)
posted 一年多以前
thank 你 so much for the tips! :) I have a really hard time using color pencils sometimes so that's why I had such a hard time with the darker 颜色 and thanks to that is why I had a hard time with the skin color since I didn't want to make it too noticeably dark
