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The critic game!

ok! so here it goes:
post a picture 你 drew and the person below 你 will give 你 a critic on your art
also if you'd be so kind could 你 also give me a critic id 爱情 it and i will also critic 你 as well
so have fun and learn!
The critic game!
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爱情 your artstyle. It's really unique. Great job!
msbass posted 一年多以前
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oh thank 你 so much!
smartone123 posted 一年多以前
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what do 你 mean could use some work?like whats wrong?
smartone123 posted 一年多以前
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ShiraKishi said:
For this drawing,40/100? Maybe,right?
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For this drawing,40/100? Maybe,right?
posted 一年多以前 
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um did 你 read the rules? your suppose to critic it and also post a peice 你 did yourself so some else can critic it
smartone123 posted 一年多以前
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I see.Sorry
ShiraKishi posted 一年多以前
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Read your 个人资料 wall,is written clearly there.Thanks for your feedback.
ShiraKishi posted 一年多以前
dontmindmeyo said:
Yours is gorgeous! I absolutely 爱情 your colouring/shading style! Only thing that feels a bit off is the way the neck is bent. I don't really know how to explain it, but it's not anything major. Everything else looks awesome though.

meh
im not the best artist out there but 嘿 ive really improved from when i first started so i guess i'll post
yeah she's not really an 日本动漫 character but and the quality is kind of :/ but
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Yours is gorgeous! I absolutely 爱情 your colouring/shading style! Only thing that feels a bit off is the way the neck is bent. I don't really know how to explain it, but it's not anything major. Everything else looks awesome though. meh im not the best artist out there but 嘿 ive really improved from when i first started so i guess i'll post yeah she's not really an 日本动漫 character but and the quality is kind of :/ but
posted 一年多以前 
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thank 你 very much XD yours is cute the bodies proportions are good but the shoulders are abit weird and the clothes lack movement and wrinkles.Also shading would be good.work on those and it would help 你 alot XD
smartone123 posted 一年多以前
msbass said:
My drawing of Gilbert ^.^
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My drawing of Gilbert ^.^
posted 一年多以前 
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the lines are clean,the 颜色 are nice and the drawing is well put so nice work there.Though this isnt a original drawing its a copy right,if not then nice work and the only other thing i think it would need is fundamental shadows at the least.Overall nice work just fix the shaodw problem and experiment with your own sstyle if 你 want to improve as an artist
smartone123 posted 一年多以前
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Thank 你 a lot for your kind critique. I understand what 你 mean about the shadowing. This drawing indeed does not have the greatest shadowing but it is a lot better when seeing it on the actual paper. My scanner couldn't clearly bring out the little shadowing I had used. :/ But again thanks a lot about your kind words ^.^ And ofc I will try to improve my skills!
msbass posted 一年多以前
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@SketchWreckThank 你 so much for your kind critique; I understand about the problem with the shadowing...it was better on paper but my scanner messed it up a little, 下一个 time I will make it 更多 intense...
msbass posted 一年多以前
SketchWreck said:
So here's mine! ^^

The one on the left is Light and the one on the right is L, both from Death Note. :))
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So here's mine! ^^ The one on the left is Light and the one on the right is L, both from Death Note. :))
posted 一年多以前 
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Srry If it's too fresh. This was a fanservice drawing >/////< but still, im very proud of it and it's one of my best works. :))
SketchWreck posted 一年多以前
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its pretty good man! the body movements have ife and the clothes have good wrinkles and the shadows are nice.I think the neck and chins is what id work on but since its 日本动漫 its forgivable.Nice work always improve man XD also i 爱情 l
smartone123 posted 一年多以前
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I 爱情 the movement of both Light and L~ Great job on that. 你 could work a little bit 更多 on making the line work cearer. But definately the drawing is pretty good~
msbass posted 一年多以前
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